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My Mind (Free verse) by Deb_djb3113
My mind is an awkward thing I just cannot explain Its like the words spinning Moving to fast with pain Its filled with broken memories That bring tears to my eyes Sometimes emotions bother me And Fill my heart with Lies Sometimes I feel my life Is nothing but a game Leaving me helplessly stranded Filling my mind with shame

Up the ladder: Wild Child
Down the ladder: Morman On A Bike

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.4
Weighted score: 4.809275
Overall Rank: 11003
Posted: February 15, 2003 7:33 PM PST; Last modified: February 15, 2003 7:33 PM PST
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[2] Fear of Garbage @ 64.56.114.147 | 15-Feb-03/10:47 PM | Reply
blah blah blah bitch bitch bitch
[n/a] Ranger @ 81.132.2.157 > Fear of Garbage | 16-Feb-03/12:02 AM | Reply
Fear of Garbage? Damn fine name.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 16-Feb-03/10:43 AM | Reply
I feel like I've read this before
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