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Ballet (Free verse) by famenglory
The curtain rises
A pink dancer is born into the soft light
The audience watches her spin and twirl
(She is their preforming monkey)
Everyone is most attentive in the first five minutes
But then starts to sleep.
Only those truly in love with her
Watch the missteps but still applaud
She soon slows to give room
For her dancing partner
The audience comes back to life
To watch this romantic story
The girl is seduced and her dance partner
Does not leave the stage.
It becomes boring again.
Snores are heard from the older patrons.
They go as unnoticed as the grandmother
We buried last month.
The dancing pair start to slow
And the audience knows its ending
So they get ready to applaud
At the death of the stage ligts
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3868
Posted: February 20, 2003 6:50 PM PST; Last modified: February 20, 2003 6:50 PM PST
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