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At A Loss (Free verse) by NewbieMe
Too often I find myself at a loss for words
Struggling for something to say
To tell you all the emotions my heart is feeling for you
Too often I find myself staring at you
Gazing at your wholeness
Admiring every detail of your body
Too often I find myself thinking
Of ways to make you happy
Of how to enjoy every moment with you
Too often I find myself imagining
What our life would be like
What the future holds for us
Too often I find myself hoping
That this will never end
Praying that we could last forever
Too often I find myself crying
Because it never did last forever
Because you left me for someone better
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.714286
Weighted score: 5.192101
Overall Rank: 4626
Posted: November 11, 2002 8:40 AM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2002 8:40 AM PST
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