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At A Loss (Free verse) by NewbieMe

Too often I find myself at a loss for words Struggling for something to say To tell you all the emotions my heart is feeling for you Too often I find myself staring at you Gazing at your wholeness Admiring every detail of your body Too often I find myself thinking Of ways to make you happy Of how to enjoy every moment with you Too often I find myself imagining What our life would be like What the future holds for us Too often I find myself hoping That this will never end Praying that we could last forever Too often I find myself crying Because it never did last forever Because you left me for someone better

Britpop 11-Nov-02/9:06 AM
I think this is really good and I feel that it has been really thought out. The reader gets quite a degree of sympathy towards the end I think.




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