on Absurd by cedand1
21 Jun 2004, 8:03 PM
DAMN, I like it I like it alot.
on The Thinker by cedand1
21 Jun 2004, 8:02 PM
Welcome to poem ranker. nice work, kinda nice to see some good poetry from a newby, I really enjoyed this one.
on No choice in the matter by cedand1
21 Jun 2004, 8:00 PM
Yea, we've got a few of those poor fellows here in Colorado Springs too. Sucks to be a statue.
on A single day by donmiguel1960
19 Jun 2004, 9:16 AM
Death can't be thwarted? other than that, 10, definitely.
on Phoebus by SupremeDreamer
19 Jun 2004, 9:10 AM
I hope you didn't write this after reading a few of mine last night! So true, no matter how hard we try, we will always reveal at least a part of who we are in whatever we write. I think it is unavoidable, kinda like death.
on A Flower for Monet by Shuushin
17 Jun 2004, 4:18 PM
Yes Yes, cudos. Very well done
on love and hate by jessicasgurl
17 Jun 2004, 4:11 PM
A hater now
on West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco
16 Jun 2004, 9:39 PM
Yea, the original was better, the repetition just doesn't work here.
on Obituary for the Moon by wilco
16 Jun 2004, 7:59 PM
You know, I've read this quite a few times now, and I like the first two stanza's, but I lost it or you lost it when you started in on the chorus. Could you try to find what you had when you started this and continue it as more of a poem than a song?
on Summers Breath on my neck by unouluvme
16 Jun 2004, 7:48 PM
Good image though, I guess you aren't as bad a poet as you think.
on for sharon by shazpen
16 Jun 2004, 7:29 PM
Looking for the soul? She will never be the same. We can try to live with who she is now. Or...
on The Freemasons by Bachus
16 Jun 2004, 7:22 PM
Do you think that tho Pope hired the free masons to build cathedrals because of the designs? The free mason's don't have a lock on good architecture. And yes, the early bird does get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese. You know man, you may think you know, because you have all these <books>. But there is nothing about the free masons, the Knights of Templar, Cylomancy, or anything else of that nature written in a place where someone like you will be able to just go have a look see. Good bit of meandering thought tho'.
replying on A life unsure by sliver
11 Jun 2004, 6:03 AM
Much.
on White Candle by crwncka1
8 Jun 2004, 7:03 PM
Black isn't a color, it's the lack of color. good words though.
replying on The curse of language and other scattered thoughts by Y2kSlamPoet
8 Jun 2004, 6:50 PM
Hey, INTRANSIT, where's that poem you showed me by zzinia about the wall? moss covered stones, etc?
replying on The curse of language and other scattered thoughts by Y2kSlamPoet
8 Jun 2004, 6:42 PM
Read this DEAR DADDY one, phycho ranker
replying on A life unsure by sliver
8 Jun 2004, 6:25 PM
Do I have to wait? INvestigate still bugs me and I have a few Ideas.
on The painted Chair by Sunshine Conkey
8 Jun 2004, 6:21 PM
How about titling it just 'the painted'? I really like the poem though. Everyone talks about their walls, this is original(At least to me)