| Re: Absurd by cedand1 |
21-Jun-04/8:03 PM |
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DAMN, I like it I like it alot.
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| Re: The Thinker by cedand1 |
21-Jun-04/8:02 PM |
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Welcome to poem ranker. nice work, kinda nice to see some good poetry from a newby, I really enjoyed this one.
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| Re: No choice in the matter by cedand1 |
21-Jun-04/8:00 PM |
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Yea, we've got a few of those poor fellows here in Colorado Springs too. Sucks to be a statue.
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| Re: A single day by donmiguel1960 |
19-Jun-04/9:16 AM |
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Death can't be thwarted? other than that, 10, definitely.
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| Re: BLOBBY by MR Blobby |
19-Jun-04/9:12 AM |
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A great big ZERO, you will soon be #1 on the worst poem list.
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| Re: Phoebus by SupremeDreamer |
19-Jun-04/9:10 AM |
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I hope you didn't write this after reading a few of mine last night! So true, no matter how hard we try, we will always reveal at least a part of who we are in whatever we write. I think it is unavoidable, kinda like death.
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| Re: daughter by sarah |
19-Jun-04/9:06 AM |
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Being a single parent is tough. My sister is the same(except she has to deal with a boy)Great poem, hang in there!
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| Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin |
17-Jun-04/4:18 PM |
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Yes Yes, cudos. Very well done
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| Re: love and hate by jessicasgurl |
17-Jun-04/4:11 PM |
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| Re: West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco |
16-Jun-04/9:39 PM |
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Yea, the original was better, the repetition just doesn't work here.
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| Re: Obituary for the Moon by wilco |
16-Jun-04/7:59 PM |
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You know, I've read this quite a few times now, and I like the first two stanza's, but I lost it or you lost it when you started in on the chorus. Could you try to find what you had when you started this and continue it as more of a poem than a song?
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| Re: Summers Breath on my neck by unouluvme |
16-Jun-04/7:48 PM |
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Good image though, I guess you aren't as bad a poet as you think.
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| Re: for sharon by shazpen |
16-Jun-04/7:29 PM |
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Looking for the soul? She will never be the same. We can try to live with who she is now. Or...
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| Re: The Freemasons by Bachus |
16-Jun-04/7:22 PM |
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Do you think that tho Pope hired the free masons to build cathedrals because of the designs? The free mason's don't have a lock on good architecture. And yes, the early bird does get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese. You know man, you may think you know, because you have all these <books>. But there is nothing about the free masons, the Knights of Templar, Cylomancy, or anything else of that nature written in a place where someone like you will be able to just go have a look see. Good bit of meandering thought tho'.
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| Re: a comment on A life unsure by sliver |
11-Jun-04/6:03 AM |
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| Re: White Candle by crwncka1 |
8-Jun-04/7:03 PM |
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Black isn't a color, it's the lack of color. good words though.
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| Re: a comment on The curse of language and other scattered thoughts by Y2kSlamPoet |
8-Jun-04/6:50 PM |
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Hey, INTRANSIT, where's that poem you showed me by zzinia about the wall? moss covered stones, etc?
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| Re: a comment on The curse of language and other scattered thoughts by Y2kSlamPoet |
8-Jun-04/6:42 PM |
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Read this DEAR DADDY one, phycho ranker
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| Re: a comment on A life unsure by sliver |
8-Jun-04/6:25 PM |
Do I have to wait? INvestigate still bugs me and I have a few Ideas.
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| Re: The painted Chair by Sunshine Conkey |
8-Jun-04/6:21 PM |
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How about titling it just 'the painted'? I really like the poem though. Everyone talks about their walls, this is original(At least to me)
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