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Summers Breath on my neck (Free verse) by unouluvme
As part of the swing, i feel,
summers breath on my neck,
stirring the hair that lays flat
the taste of the sun,
forcing my tounge out for cool air
the smell of green water,
that clings to my skin
touch of the grass, now slightly yellowed,
always under my fingertips
but just out of reach, never close enough for me
like a butterfly, slipping out of your hand
like the last drop of water, never reaching your mouth
like running, never reaching the moon
the taste of the sun,
the smell of green water,
summers breath on my neck.
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Posted: April 2, 2004 3:22 PM PST; Last modified: April 17, 2004 8:46 AM PDT
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