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The Dread (Free verse) by scitz
Navigating blind with awkward fingers, Previous touches once successful withheld. Trying to perfect an impulse, To make something familiar exclusive for her. Like twilight I am failing. For my eyes see a perfect sculpture, That my touch would not be worthy of. Guilt is 'liberty's' sword. With me impaled upon its russet blade, Willingly slain by its creators hands. I fall deeper in to despair, Carving myself a valley of shadows, That led me deeper in to temptation. Lies become you, Then you feel the air leave your lungs, When she asks you if you had a good time.

Up the ladder: Kill me
Down the ladder: Hollywood Is The Pits

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.4482355
Overall Rank: 2964
Posted: November 1, 2003 9:19 AM PST; Last modified: November 1, 2003 9:19 AM PST
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Comments:
[9] titan69 @ 62.31.23.63 | 1-Nov-03/11:39 AM | Reply
And the guilt will never leave you.
[9] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 | 1-Nov-03/9:05 PM | Reply
A perfect moment for bedazzling drug use. Used, naturally, as a smoke screen. lol.
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 2-Nov-03/7:33 AM | Reply
Well done.
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