poemranker ::The Thinker by cedand1

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Free verse № 106048

The Thinker

Member since 2004 · Posted 21 Jun 2004 · 3 comments

Oh what a dream! I used to view the world as a blank canvas Paintbrush in hand, stroke in check Prepared to paint the picture of perfection Now that canvas has withered and died In its place is a picture, very much alive The picture is ugly and repulsive My hands and eyes are idle now I no longer feel the urge to create Nor do I wish to transform and tinker Exasperated and apathetic, I surrender my brush to become The Thinker

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3 comments

[10] sliver 21-Jun-04/8:02 PM Reply
Welcome to poem ranker. nice work, kinda nice to see some good poetry from a newby, I really enjoyed this one.
[10] wilco 21-Jun-04/8:02 PM Reply
Ok, I dig this one..and extra points for being from Tennessee. ;0)
[10] Sasha 21-Jun-04/8:39 PM Reply
Wonderful!

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