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The Thinker (Free verse) by cedand1
Oh what a dream!
I used to view the world as a blank canvas
Paintbrush in hand, stroke in check
Prepared to paint the picture of perfection
Now that canvas has withered and died
In its place is a picture, very much alive
The picture is ugly and repulsive
My hands and eyes are idle now
I no longer feel the urge to create
Nor do I wish to transform and tinker
Exasperated and apathetic,
I surrender my brush to become The Thinker
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2515
Posted: June 21, 2004 7:46 PM PDT; Last modified: June 21, 2004 7:46 PM PDT
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