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The Thinker (Free verse) by cedand1
Oh what a dream! I used to view the world as a blank canvas Paintbrush in hand, stroke in check Prepared to paint the picture of perfection Now that canvas has withered and died In its place is a picture, very much alive The picture is ugly and repulsive My hands and eyes are idle now I no longer feel the urge to create Nor do I wish to transform and tinker Exasperated and apathetic, I surrender my brush to become The Thinker

Up the ladder: Weeping Willow
Down the ladder: again

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2505
Posted: June 21, 2004 7:46 PM PDT; Last modified: June 21, 2004 7:46 PM PDT
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[10] sliver @ 63.190.80.214 | 21-Jun-04/8:02 PM | Reply
Welcome to poem ranker. nice work, kinda nice to see some good poetry from a newby, I really enjoyed this one.
[10] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 | 21-Jun-04/8:02 PM | Reply
Ok, I dig this one..and extra points for being from Tennessee. ;0)
[10] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 | 21-Jun-04/8:39 PM | Reply
Wonderful!

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