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Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man (Free verse) by Bethy
His hands are soft upon my skin And he touches me deep down within... And he looks at me with silent desire but he does not know I am the one, that feels his fire... I watch his mouth and catch every word and pretend like I am listening But hardly nothing, I have heard... His body stands tall like a great oak tree Oh press your body, gently,needingly upon me... I imagine that you stroke my thighs and quench my thirst I can not breathe My heart pounds loudly, like it might burst... If only you knew what my eyes think You,d press your lips on mine and feel me sink... Into your soul I,d fall so fast and show you love and everlast... This secret I hold must be said someday But I am afraid It may make you go away... So for now, I will want you only in my thoughts I,ll watch from a distance So I won,t be caught... Because you are with another the mother of your sons I would never harm them Until you decide, its over and done...

Down the ladder: Fugitively Speaking

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2510
Posted: August 3, 2005 12:38 PM PDT; Last modified: August 3, 2005 12:38 PM PDT
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[7] T. Jonathron Remp @ 128.252.229.185 | 3-Aug-05/1:30 PM | Reply
Adulterous fun
[n/a] Bethy @ 24.222.32.155 > T. Jonathron Remp | 3-Aug-05/3:01 PM | Reply
Why thankyou Mr.T
[8] PoeticOne @ 24.43.122.90 | 3-Aug-05/1:48 PM | Reply
I like the flow of it, great wording too! Good Job!
[n/a] Bethy @ 24.222.32.155 > PoeticOne | 3-Aug-05/3:03 PM | Reply
Thankyou for your great comments :)
[6] toward @ 65.222.80.242 | 4-Aug-05/1:53 PM | Reply
I like it - the subject matter hits home. Honest and sad without being weepy. I stumbled over one line: "If you only knew what my eyes think"... The rest was concrete, but that was kind of abstract. Thanks for sharing
[n/a] Bethy @ 24.222.32.157 > toward | 4-Aug-05/2:42 PM | Reply
Thank you toward...yes abstract...its like eating a peanut butter sandwich without tastebuds...lol...its like seeing something, and not saying it outloud...so your eyes are speaking in your mind... Bethy :)
[6] | Broken | @ 202.156.2.82 | 5-Aug-05/8:21 AM | Reply
Wow wee ..... (",*)
[n/a] Bethy @ 24.222.32.211 > | Broken | | 5-Aug-05/12:04 PM | Reply
hehehe...its a secret....right!!! thanks Bethy:)
[8] Sasha @ 68.49.8.49 | 15-Aug-05/12:58 PM | Reply
I'm not sure the jagged metrics work for this poem. Excellent use of everlast as a verb (or possibly a noun)
[9] bellafuego @ 199.77.249.2 | 4-Sep-05/12:45 PM | Reply
wow!!! this poem could have been a scene in one of those lifetime tv movies about cheating husbands
[n/a] Bethy @ 24.222.32.197 > bellafuego | 5-Sep-05/3:05 PM | Reply
thank you for your comments, I like your poetry too...:) Bethy
[10] Sheeva @ 205.213.111.54 | 22-May-09/9:03 AM | Reply
Fantastical!!!!!
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