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The Blind Senses (Lyric) by Miggy
One chance was all I needed One chance is what I got Some angel fell from heaven And landed in my arms (Bridge) This year was going nowhere But as soon as I meet her Can’t believe it wasn’t sooner (Chorus) The dream isn’t close to being real But who could tell me I’m just too blind, too blind A picture has left my senses numb Yet don’t know if she’s my kind Gotta see as tomorrow goes on Leaving all the eggs in one basket They could all be eaten for all I care No one shall deny my one shot No one will answer my prayer (Chorus) There’s no knowing what’ll come out It’s only one girl, one day after all At least she saved me from my fall If now we would have this feeling sprout (Bridge) (Chorus/Ending)

Up the ladder: DEATH

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2518
Posted: November 22, 2004 6:16 PM PST; Last modified: November 22, 2004 6:16 PM PST
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