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short clip about dc, #2

by jsd

Member since 2004 · Posted 11 Apr 2004 · 3 comments

situated slightly outside society in the heart of hypocrisy oh, but this ain't just any city it's the epicenter of pro-americana where everyone's wearing their latest persona

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[10] ggawrysi 11-Apr-04/10:40 PM Reply
not often that a very short poem tells a complete story with a distinct point... i don't know, maybe cuz i live in dc it makes it easier to understand it. regardless, well done
[9] tre 11-Apr-04/10:41 PM Reply
very kool, i like it :)
[9] deleted user 12-Apr-04/8:28 AM Reply
Succinct! The last line, though, "wearing" seems wrong, maybe something stronger like shouting.