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short clip about dc, #2
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jsd
situated slightly outside society in the heart of hypocrisy oh, but this ain't just any city it's the epicenter of pro-americana where everyone's wearing their latest persona
hypatia
12-Apr-04/8:28 AM
Succinct! The last line, though, "wearing" seems wrong, maybe something stronger like shouting.
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