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again (Free verse) by the indign
et tu again look back and smile again think back to what was lost remember what once was forget again a timeless leak flowing streaming floating unsure untouched un un again again touch and lose and lost and to et tu again a sense a foul faulter fall crumble crash sense again torching semblannce happy somber little follow something hollow drenching drown the tiny tiny again the fleeing flying dreaming again the losing frowning scalding look back and forget and smile again think back to what was never had never reach and never breathed forget again

Up the ladder: The Thinker
Down the ladder: The Cessation of Fidelity

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2506
Posted: March 24, 2004 7:53 PM PST; Last modified: March 24, 2004 7:53 PM PST
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[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 25-Mar-04/6:49 AM | Reply
smells like a poem; a good approximation.
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