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White Candle (Free verse) by crwncka1
Though this candle i see, Clear as could be, Flickering bright, Though the darkness, All colors of the spectrum. From the clear wax, Dripping off the side, Fading to the color black, As i look though the center. I see all colors, As this candle burns, Bright as the sun, On a clear blue day.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5747
Posted: June 21, 2003 2:32 AM PDT; Last modified: June 21, 2003 2:32 AM PDT
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[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-Jun-03/6:31 AM | Reply
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[9] sliver @ 63.190.81.70 | 8-Jun-04/7:03 PM | Reply
Black isn't a color, it's the lack of color. good words though.
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