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Free verse № 53581

White Candle

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Jun 2003 · 2 comments

Though this candle i see, Clear as could be, Flickering bright, Though the darkness, All colors of the spectrum. From the clear wax, Dripping off the side, Fading to the color black, As i look though the center. I see all colors, As this candle burns, Bright as the sun, On a clear blue day.

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[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 21-Jun-03/6:31 AM Reply
Thorazine
[9] sliver 8-Jun-04/7:03 PM Reply
Black isn't a color, it's the lack of color. good words though.