Replying to a comment on:

White Candle (Free verse) by crwncka1

Though this candle i see, Clear as could be, Flickering bright, Though the darkness, All colors of the spectrum. From the clear wax, Dripping off the side, Fading to the color black, As i look though the center. I see all colors, As this candle burns, Bright as the sun, On a clear blue day.

sliver 8-Jun-04/7:03 PM
Black isn't a color, it's the lack of color. good words though.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001