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for sharon (Free verse) by shazpen
Everything about us is dirty we fight like Apaches Me and other spirit half see the marker at the same time why in the middle of warmth and lush there are such reckless and bare things-a signal moves through rock as resistor,rivers,tracks,and roads conduct bodies as capacitors-speech and imagination the gauges--coughed into life a permanent misfire a birthmark on the mind and you`re looking at malpractice continue to breathe shy casting for me reaching throwing out pulling lose a limb melt shape mold and plumage brackish water tinting the white metal a lower heat and landing deep under the soil where it left it`s mark

Up the ladder: blacksoul/disable/reply
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5899
Posted: June 16, 2004 4:09 PM PDT; Last modified: June 16, 2004 4:09 PM PDT
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[8] sliver @ 63.190.81.28 | 16-Jun-04/7:29 PM | Reply
Looking for the soul? She will never be the same. We can try to live with who she is now. Or...
[10] god'swife @ 4.233.113.83 | 22-Jun-04/12:42 PM | Reply
Terrific.
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