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love and hate (Free verse) by jessicasgurl
love and hate are two thigs in the avrage life love is good and full of good things but then you got hate hate aint all that good in the life but you got lovers and haters let meeh explain love to you love is great full of happieness and hugs and kisses you have to love to get all those special moments. hate now heres hate hates full of things that people dont sumthimes understand and things in hate are just bad i dont know how else to put it now tell meeh are you a lover or a hater

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.7310586
Overall Rank: 11798
Posted: June 17, 2004 10:21 AM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2004 10:21 AM PDT
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[n/a] jessicasgurl @ 24.118.251.83 | 17-Jun-04/10:31 AM | Reply
this is a good poem
[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 17-Jun-04/10:53 AM | Reply
things, average, ain't (ai not), me, happiness, here's, hate's, don't, sometimes, me

p.s. no one will ever love you
[n/a] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 > deleted user | 17-Jun-04/10:59 AM | Reply
Also, "I am a colossal dismembered buttock" should be changed to "I am a dismembereds' colossal buttock".
[0] sliver @ 63.190.80.219 | 17-Jun-04/4:11 PM | Reply
A hater now
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.135 | 18-Jun-04/7:53 AM | Reply
terribly disappointing
[9] DustyStar @ 24.162.26.96 | 22-Jun-04/10:39 AM | Reply
AND TO EVERYBODY WHO READS THIS, THIS IS MY COUSINS POEM IF U DONT LIKE U R A HATER.Very good Shay I LOVE IT
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.135 > DustyStar | 22-Jun-04/11:46 AM | Reply
You're bonkers.
[0] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 24-Jun-04/3:25 AM | Reply
Do they have schools in your country?
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