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Back In Time (Free verse) by stolenpurity As I look
In this mirror
The image of what once was
And will never be
Shadows my mind
As I take a turn
Back in time.
Back to when we were happy
Back to when we were blue
And back to when
I loved you.
Now I sit here and cry
As I wonder
What went wrong
While you're in the future
With another girl
A girl in place of me.
Don't you love me?
Don't you even care?
You broke my heart
Yet, I still love you
And even care for you
After we went out separate ways
You, to the future
I, to the past
As I sit here
In this world of yesterday
My lips painted a crimson hue
Tears streaking my face
I am taken back
To yesterday?
Up the ladder:
Blinded
Down the ladder:
love and hate
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Posted: March 8, 2003 1:40 PM PST; Last modified: March 8, 2003 1:40 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11791 Comments:
bleh...cliche' without the cathy tune.
*catchy
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i took it from them long time gone.
in a dingey classroom
they laughed.
later that night, on the wet sand by the beach
I found a discarded bra
among the cat-tails,
then went back to the brokendown car
to make out with her sister.