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My Life As a Single Teenage Girl (Haiku) by Princess_Snowflake
I like being a single teenager Without dating any boys around Until I'm older enough to do it.
Up the ladder: love and hate
Down the ladder: Voices
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.7310586
Overall Rank: 11793
Posted: January 27, 2004 1:10 PM PST; Last modified: January 27, 2004 1:10 PM PST
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[7] irishfolksuicide @ 81.178.235.157 | 27-Jan-04/1:21 PM | Reply
Older enough to do it is not grammatical. Try stopping the haiku at 'until I'm older' only 23 syllables then.
[8] middenHeap @ 217.82.10.207 > irishfolksuicide | 27-Jan-04/5:21 PM | Reply
NOOO!!! be careful, she edits. Take your comment back, or she will blithely delete the unintentional double entendre.

Have you read her coffee poem? lololol.
[1] zodiac @ 152.18.33.190 | 27-Jan-04/4:59 PM | Reply
minus 8 for not being a haiku. Minus another 1 for not being very poetic or making any sense.
[8] middenHeap @ 217.82.10.207 | 27-Jan-04/5:18 PM | Reply
Once again, you crack me up. If only you were doing it on purpose.
[1] Stacy Stewart @ 67.51.232.76 | 13-Dec-04/9:32 AM | Reply
This is not a Haiku
A haiku has 5,7,5 and is about nature

Say the count was right then it would be a Senriu, those are about humans.
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