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My Life As a Single Teenage Girl
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Haiku
) by
Princess_Snowflake
I like being a single teenager Without dating any boys around Until I'm older enough to do it.
irishfolksuicide
27-Jan-04/1:21 PM
Older enough to do it is not grammatical. Try stopping the haiku at 'until I'm older' only 23 syllables then.
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