replying on Getting Burned by sliver
15 Jul 2009, 8:35 PM
I totally agree, it's rough. I probably wrote it at 2 AM and never cleaned it up, it's funny, I was thinking similar thoughts the other day, maybe I should write a new one and delete this one... or something...
replying on Gladly For Love by sliver
6 Mar 2009, 7:03 PM
too true, thanks for the comment
on To Michelle by ALChemy
4 Feb 2009, 11:11 PM
I am baffled yet again, that's why I saved this to my fav's. Stupendous, genious, a piece of art.
on Gladly For Love by sliver
4 Feb 2009, 10:50 PM
I know it's cheesy, but what's so wrong with that verse in particular?
on Engine Braking by INTRANSIT
14 Dec 2007, 10:16 PM
Then the air brakes
Staining to hold the load
As the curve looms
Incidius asphalt
Dying to kill
Hot brakes
Nothing but a jake
Standing between me and death
Untill salvation arises
A sign
Runaway ramp ahead
Fuck it
The altenative is death
Staining to hold the load
As the curve looms
Incidius asphalt
Dying to kill
Hot brakes
Nothing but a jake
Standing between me and death
Untill salvation arises
A sign
Runaway ramp ahead
Fuck it
The altenative is death
replying on Collective Soul by sliver
23 Nov 2007, 8:20 AM
I've never heard the gift economy explained like that, but I have certainly lived that way. Now I'll have to find the book.
replying on Heroes to the End by sliver
22 Nov 2007, 6:05 PM
How about these adjustments? BTW what video were you referring to on poetry .org
on Who's on First? by Melanie Jade
12 Nov 2007, 6:23 PM
Sound like you got a good batch of l.s.d.
on Turning British by INTRANSIT
12 Nov 2007, 6:13 PM
What's next? Irish pub slush?
on INTELLIGENCIA by INTRANSIT
12 Nov 2007, 6:09 PM
As we think ourselves into a mellenial grave eh?
on Some poems by INTRANSIT
12 Nov 2007, 6:00 PM
Well done INTRANSIT, Well done. I can certainly relate to the I.C.U. part. Another well deserved ten for you. I haven't been around for a while but if time permits I'll read a few more of yours.
replying on Taste of Ash (A long project barely beginning) by sliver
11 Apr 2007, 8:09 PM
Is this an answer to your question?
on Temptation by PoeticXTC
23 Dec 2005, 1:12 AM
A worthy temptation for such a fall I imagine.
on Never Let Go Again by TLRufener
23 Dec 2005, 1:06 AM
Obviously a whoopsy-Daisy of a day, Keep it on the bright side.
on Tulips and Roses by Mona Lisa
23 Dec 2005, 1:03 AM
What does a gown of lashes have to do with Venus orbiting the Earth, Plus the other unity issues previously mentioned. Don't give up on it, just consider new alternatives.I didn't like hearing cotton twice, consider woolen womb maybe?
replying on Just for Show (Suicide revised) by sliver
23 Dec 2005, 12:58 AM
Does you get my point better now?
on After the Storm by somemorepoetry
19 Dec 2005, 12:31 AM
Why the morbidity? It was going so well.
How sad that you only retained a sliver.