| Re: PHOTO by madamefrufru |
16-Jul-09/1:28 PM |
I can picture her there, in the casket,
How sad that you only retained a sliver.
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| Re: a comment on Getting Burned by sliver |
15-Jul-09/8:35 PM |
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I totally agree, it's rough. I probably wrote it at 2 AM and never cleaned it up, it's funny, I was thinking similar thoughts the other day, maybe I should write a new one and delete this one... or something...
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| Re: a comment on Gladly For Love by sliver |
6-Mar-09/7:03 PM |
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too true, thanks for the comment
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| Re: To Michelle by ALChemy |
4-Feb-09/11:11 PM |
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I am baffled yet again, that's why I saved this to my fav's. Stupendous, genious, a piece of art.
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| Re: Gladly For Love by sliver |
4-Feb-09/10:50 PM |
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I know it's cheesy, but what's so wrong with that verse in particular?
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| Re: Engine Braking by INTRANSIT |
14-Dec-07/10:16 PM |
Then the air brakes
Staining to hold the load
As the curve looms
Incidius asphalt
Dying to kill
Hot brakes
Nothing but a jake
Standing between me and death
Untill salvation arises
A sign
Runaway ramp ahead
Fuck it
The altenative is death
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| Re: a comment on Collective Soul by sliver |
23-Nov-07/8:20 AM |
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I've never heard the gift economy explained like that, but I have certainly lived that way. Now I'll have to find the book.
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| Re: a comment on Heroes to the End by sliver |
22-Nov-07/6:05 PM |
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How about these adjustments? BTW what video were you referring to on poetry .org
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| Re: Who's on First? by Melanie Jade |
12-Nov-07/6:23 PM |
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Sound like you got a good batch of l.s.d.
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| Re: Turning British by INTRANSIT |
12-Nov-07/6:13 PM |
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What's next? Irish pub slush?
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| Re: INTELLIGENCIA by INTRANSIT |
12-Nov-07/6:09 PM |
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As we think ourselves into a mellenial grave eh?
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| Re: Some poems by INTRANSIT |
12-Nov-07/6:00 PM |
Well done INTRANSIT, Well done. I can certainly relate to the I.C.U. part. Another well deserved ten for you. I haven't been around for a while but if time permits I'll read a few more of yours.
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| Re: a comment on Taste of Ash (A long project barely beginning) by sliver |
11-Apr-07/8:09 PM |
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Is this an answer to your question?
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| Re: a comment on Deja Vu by sliver |
27-Apr-06/5:56 AM |
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| Re: Temptation by PoeticXTC |
23-Dec-05/1:12 AM |
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A worthy temptation for such a fall I imagine.
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| Re: Never Let Go Again by TLRufener |
23-Dec-05/1:06 AM |
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Obviously a whoopsy-Daisy of a day, Keep it on the bright side.
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| Re: Tulips and Roses by Mona Lisa |
23-Dec-05/1:03 AM |
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What does a gown of lashes have to do with Venus orbiting the Earth, Plus the other unity issues previously mentioned. Don't give up on it, just consider new alternatives.I didn't like hearing cotton twice, consider woolen womb maybe?
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| Re: a comment on Just for Show (Suicide revised) by sliver |
23-Dec-05/12:58 AM |
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Does you get my point better now?
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| Re: Static by wilco |
19-Dec-05/12:33 AM |
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I seem to enjoy everything you write. Another10.
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| Re: After the Storm by somemorepoetry |
19-Dec-05/12:31 AM |
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Why the morbidity? It was going so well.
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