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Collective Soul (Free verse) by sliver
I wish I could become a better poet,
Find new and interesting ideas designed
to stimulate new growth in the minds of men.
Write lines guaranteed to stop your breath,
make you stand back and gasp in a sudden
realization of what you've been missing in life.
I want you to see things through my eyes-
Start to experience life. Don't just take
my word for it. Get out and do it!! Believe
me I've been through it.
I would like to make you see that suffering
does have it's rewards. That sometimes we
do have to fight wars. That beauty is everywhere
and that charity is not giving what we have to
spare. People are needy everywhere and we can all help.
I wish I could stand beside you through your
entire life and offer you convincing ways to cope
Give you words of strength and courage, tell
you anecdotes of hope.
I want to convince you of the need to breath
Take a deep breath and think. Consider
the consequences of your actions, find a
new perspective even if it requires a drink.
But if it takes two, find a new direction.
I wish I could delve deep into every heart
Help you find the parts that are pure. Make sure
you recognize them,and help you cure the rest.
I wish I could hide exquisite words in a
couple lines of verse to impart
knowledge and understanding when things
are at their worst. Pen lines that last the ages
Help mankind to always understand that it isn't about
ourselves. We also answer as a whole.
We do have a collective soul.
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.333333
Weighted score: 5.516546
Overall Rank: 2640
Posted: November 12, 2007 5:56 PM PST; Last modified: November 12, 2007 5:56 PM PST
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what the hell?