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Never Let Go Again

Member since 2004 · Posted 21 Dec 2005 · 6 comments

I don't even know Where to start So many thoughts are running Through my head Iâve only had you for a short time And today was almost the end You were faced With a pressing choice Between your life and death When fate stepped in to intervene And keep you safe from harm Sitting here quietly After you called to tell me About the car accident I can only be thankful That you are alright Tears come to my eyes As my mind planes over What could have been But then I bring myself back To the fact that you are alright It scares me that I almost lost you And I know that When I see you next I will take you into my arms And never let go again

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6 comments

[4] cyan9 22-Dec-05/3:59 AM Reply

Oh the drama of it all, how will I ever go on living without you? well, Frankly my dear, I dont give a damn.

[n/a] TLRufener › cyan9 22-Dec-05/7:44 AM Reply

You don't have to give a damn. This poem isn't meant for you or so you'll care.

[4] cyan9 › TLRufener 23-Dec-05/2:57 AM Reply

I dont mean to cause offense, but your use of cliche to invoke deeper emotions is starting to bug me now, the poem on its own is worth more than the vote I have given it, but after having read many of your pieces I am starting to get bugged. Im sure to the person that this would have been intended, it would be very special to hear it, but to me, I have heard it all before from you, whats next????

[7] zodiac 22-Dec-05/8:58 AM Reply

Hey, you included a specific detail! Bravo! And I thought you were going to make it through the semester without learning anything.

[8] sliver 23-Dec-05/1:06 AM Reply

Obviously a whoopsy-Daisy of a day, Keep it on the bright side.

[5] Dan garcia-Black 25-Dec-05/1:46 PM Reply

"When I see you next
I will take you into my arms
And never let go again" kidnap?