Poemranker [Poem: Never Let Go Again] [by TLRufener] Thu Nov 21 10:35:38 PST 2024

I don't even know Where to start So many thoughts are running Through my head Iâve only had you for a short time And today was almost the end You were faced With a pressing choice Between your life and death When fate stepped in to intervene And keep you safe from harm Sitting here quietly After you called to tell me About the car accident I can only be thankful That you are alright Tears come to my eyes As my mind planes over What could have been But then I bring myself back To the fact that you are alright It scares me that I almost lost you And I know that When I see you next I will take you into my arms And never let go again

[4] cyan9 @ 217.40.63.105 | 22-Dec-05/3:59 AM | Reply

Oh the drama of it all, how will I ever go on living without you? well, Frankly my dear, I dont give a damn.

[n/a] TLRufener @ 68.115.23.42 > cyan9 | 22-Dec-05/7:44 AM | Reply

You don't have to give a damn. This poem isn't meant for you or so you'll care.

[4] cyan9 @ 217.40.63.105 > TLRufener | 23-Dec-05/2:57 AM | Reply

I dont mean to cause offense, but your use of cliche to invoke deeper emotions is starting to bug me now, the poem on its own is worth more than the vote I have given it, but after having read many of your pieces I am starting to get bugged. Im sure to the person that this would have been intended, it would be very special to hear it, but to me, I have heard it all before from you, whats next????

[7] zodiac @ 70.109.2.131 | 22-Dec-05/8:58 AM | Reply

Hey, you included a specific detail! Bravo! And I thought you were going to make it through the semester without learning anything.

[8] sliver @ 172.195.78.21 | 23-Dec-05/1:06 AM | Reply

Obviously a whoopsy-Daisy of a day, Keep it on the bright side.

[5] Dan garcia-Black @ 209.247.222.45 | 25-Dec-05/1:46 PM | Reply

"When I see you next
I will take you into my arms
And never let go again" kidnap?