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the birds are still here (Free verse) by ay deee
there are these birds living in the trees outside my house tonight i can hear two of them one of them says chirp chirp and the other one says chirp and they go back and forth back and forth its like a nice little circle hey hey i'm here every once in a while one of them says chirpchirpchirpchirp chirp chirp and the other one says chirp where the hell are you at i'm here most of the time when i go out there there are lots of birds talking and i cant tell what any of them are saying

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8350
Posted: September 3, 2005 10:28 PM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2005 10:28 PM PDT
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[6] Tintagiles @ 142.166.234.130 | 7-Sep-05/8:10 PM | Reply
Hee hee. That's lovely.
[n/a] ay deee @ 24.255.87.123 > Tintagiles | 7-Sep-05/8:33 PM | Reply
thank you very much.
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