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the birds are still here

Member since 2005 · Posted 3 Sep 2005 · 2 comments

there are these birds living in the trees outside my house tonight i can hear two of them one of them says chirp chirp and the other one says chirp and they go back and forth back and forth its like a nice little circle hey hey i'm here every once in a while one of them says chirpchirpchirpchirp chirp chirp and the other one says chirp where the hell are you at i'm here most of the time when i go out there there are lots of birds talking and i cant tell what any of them are saying

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[6] Tintagiles 7-Sep-05/8:10 PM Reply
Hee hee. That's lovely.
[n/a] ay deee › Tintagiles 7-Sep-05/8:33 PM Reply
thank you very much.