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Free verse № 134656

laugh again

Member since 2001 · Posted 6 Dec 2005 · 4 comments

you pulled a laugh from my netheregions and asked for an explanation. really... all i could say was that i wished the rim of a coin were a mobius strip. that would create a more consistent metaphor.

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4 comments

[6] cyan9 6-Dec-05/2:47 AM Reply
Too much to think about for me to want to dive in and try to understand it (especially in the morning).
[n/a] ALChemy 6-Dec-05/3:08 AM Reply
Damn! That's a really bad case of Peyronie's disease.
[5] Dovina 6-Dec-05/1:04 PM Reply
How can the rim of a coin be a mobius strip? What metaphor?
[7] zodiac 7-Dec-05/1:27 AM Reply
A mobius strip is a metaphor. For the rim of a coin, among other things.