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laugh again (Free verse) by skaskowski you pulled a laugh from my netheregions
and asked for an explanation. really...
all i could say was that i wished the rim
of a coin
were a mobius strip.
that would create a more consistent metaphor.
Up the ladder:
line, hooked a stinker
Down the ladder:
Snowy evening
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Posted: December 6, 2005 2:39 AM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2005 2:39 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.9761596 Overall Rank: 8341 Comments:
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cyan9 @ 217.40.63.105
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6-Dec-05/2:47 AM
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Too much to think about for me to want to dive in and try to understand it (especially in the morning).
Damn! That's a really bad case of Peyronie's disease.
How can the rim of a coin be a mobius strip? What metaphor?
A mobius strip is a metaphor. For the rim of a coin, among other things.
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