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BY ALL YOUR HEART (Free verse) by prettyktm Don't take my heart away
And blow it to pieces
I say and yes I believe
Love is too keep
And I don't want to see it dead
Like a green leaf
In the winter time
And I don't want to shed any tears
So tell me,be true to me
Don't you love me with all your heart
And if I give you all of me
Will you keep me by your side always
Coz,I am hoping and I am dreaming
My life to end with you
So tell me before we go too far
Do you love me like I do
Do you love me
By all your heart.
Up the ladder:
the comet
Down the ladder:
regret
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Posted: July 29, 2005 11:05 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2005 11:05 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9761596 Overall Rank: 8382 Comments:
Ilike the simplicity of the read to the lips,
what is poetry, if not the tongue, the lips and the head in unism...
Hi,maybe you're right.
The actual English expression is "With all your heart". I'm not trying to be hypercritical, that just seemed important, seeing as it's your title and all.
HI,THANKS.Sorry for the Big mistake.
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Coz> 'cause
Do you love me like I do> implies, Do you love me like I love me?
By all your heart> ? with all your heart?
( and, sweetie, he WILL say and promise anything and everything to get 'all of you', and in all probability he will not stand by your side forever; in fact, he may never speak to you again.)
poems are taken for my own personal experience,but that's not so
anyway,right now I'm searching for that thing call love and what
with the heavy rain fall in my city bombay,guess my dream boy is
swim in those waters trying to reach me.take care.
"Love is like a butterfly; the more you chase after it, the harder it is to catch. If you sit very still, at peace, it will come to land softly upon you."
me come true soon.take care