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BY ALL YOUR HEART

Member since 2005 · Posted 29 Jul 2005 · 8 comments

Don't take my heart away And blow it to pieces I say and yes I believe Love is too keep And I don't want to see it dead Like a green leaf In the winter time And I don't want to shed any tears So tell me,be true to me Don't you love me with all your heart And if I give you all of me Will you keep me by your side always Coz,I am hoping and I am dreaming My life to end with you So tell me before we go too far Do you love me like I do Do you love me By all your heart.

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[3] LilMsLadyPoet 31-Jul-05/7:03 AM Reply

too keep> to keep
Coz> 'cause
Do you love me like I do> implies, Do you love me like I love me?
By all your heart> ? with all your heart?
( and, sweetie, he WILL say and promise anything and everything to get 'all of you', and in all probability he will not stand by your side forever; in fact, he may never speak to you again.)

[n/a] prettyktm › LilMsLadyPoet 1-Aug-05/1:11 AM Reply

hi,thanks for your concered and your comment,most of the time my
poems are taken for my own personal experience,but that's not so
anyway,right now I'm searching for that thing call love and what
with the heavy rain fall in my city bombay,guess my dream boy is
swim in those waters trying to reach me.take care.

[3] LilMsLadyPoet › prettyktm 8-Aug-05/9:00 AM Reply

prettytkm...good luck in your search! Maybe your dream boy is not swimming, perhaps he is on a lovely boat, afloat and drifting, looking also....(smile).
"Love is like a butterfly; the more you chase after it, the harder it is to catch. If you sit very still, at peace, it will come to land softly upon you."

[n/a] prettyktm › LilMsLadyPoet 9-Aug-05/12:20 AM Reply

HI,thanks for your lovely comment and I hope that your wishes for
me come true soon.take care

[7] daggatolar 1-Aug-05/6:38 AM Reply

Ilike the simplicity of the read to the lips,
what is poetry, if not the tongue, the lips and the head in unism...

[n/a] prettyktm › daggatolar 2-Aug-05/1:05 AM Reply

Hi,maybe you're right.

[10] zodiac 9-Aug-05/1:43 AM Reply

The actual English expression is "With all your heart". I'm not trying to be hypercritical, that just seemed important, seeing as it's your title and all.

[n/a] prettyktm › zodiac 9-Aug-05/10:31 PM Reply

HI,THANKS.Sorry for the Big mistake.