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BY ALL YOUR HEART (Free verse) by prettyktm

Don't take my heart away And blow it to pieces I say and yes I believe Love is too keep And I don't want to see it dead Like a green leaf In the winter time And I don't want to shed any tears So tell me,be true to me Don't you love me with all your heart And if I give you all of me Will you keep me by your side always Coz,I am hoping and I am dreaming My life to end with you So tell me before we go too far Do you love me like I do Do you love me By all your heart.

LilMsLadyPoet 31-Jul-05/7:03 AM
too keep> to keep
Coz> 'cause
Do you love me like I do> implies, Do you love me like I love me?
By all your heart> ? with all your heart?
( and, sweetie, he WILL say and promise anything and everything to get 'all of you', and in all probability he will not stand by your side forever; in fact, he may never speak to you again.)




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