Replying to a comment on:
laugh again
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Free verse
) by
skaskowski
you pulled a laugh from my netheregions and asked for an explanation. really... all i could say was that i wished the rim of a coin were a mobius strip. that would create a more consistent metaphor.
Dovina
6-Dec-05/1:04 PM
How can the rim of a coin be a mobius strip? What metaphor?
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