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handshake (Free verse) by ay deee
man you've got a strong grip shake once fierce but friendly a brief glance you and me we made a pact we'll see if we're best friends but for now i know your name and your home town an acquaintance to be sure a co-worker bloke, dude whad you do yesterday? seen any action? i'm goin to moe's the one around the corner from the grocery for a beer later whaddaya say? man, i say this place it's like a damn smelly ass garbage incinerator can i borrow your hammer drill? thanks preciate it what's your name again? i 'm no good with names man well... its gettin on that time i got my folks waitin see yall tmorrow

Up the ladder: Rooster Rape
Down the ladder: the birds are still here

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8349
Posted: September 10, 2005 4:01 PM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2005 4:01 PM PDT
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