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handshake (Free verse) by ay deee
man
you've got a strong grip
shake once
fierce but friendly
a brief glance
you and me
we made a pact
we'll see if we're best friends
but for now i know
your name
and your home town
an acquaintance to be sure
a co-worker
bloke, dude
whad you do yesterday?
seen any action?
i'm goin to moe's
the one around the corner from the grocery
for a beer
later
whaddaya say?
man, i say this place
it's like a damn
smelly ass
garbage incinerator
can i borrow your hammer drill?
thanks
preciate it
what's your name again?
i 'm no good with names man
well...
its gettin on that time
i got my folks waitin
see yall tmorrow
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8361
Posted: September 10, 2005 4:01 PM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2005 4:01 PM PDT
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