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The devils win (Free verse) by firestar_2580 You make my heart beat like thunder in a devils dome. You
make me feel like a soldier who's just lost a challenging battle. This
soldier is now lost at sea without he's soul
but with a deep red robe to hold as the devil pull's him into the deep
blue sea naked and traped for all eternity
The soldier losses he's power of survival and the devil win's again and
again though out eternity.
Up the ladder:
Soup Can
Down the ladder:
Wonât Somebody Be My Friend
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Posted: May 24, 2004 11:53 PM PDT; Last modified: May 24, 2004 11:53 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9761596 Overall Rank: 8352 Comments:
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zodiac @ 65.161.41.48
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25-May-04/4:57 AM
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intense. truly stellar. 10
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Grammar Check - no Content Check - no Why do you even bother, this must have been written in a matter of forty-five seconds. My shitty comment took longer than that. -2- 144 view(s)
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