The devils win

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 May 2004 · 2 comments

You make my heart beat like thunder in a devils dome. You make me feel like a soldier who's just lost a challenging battle. This soldier is now lost at sea without he's soul but with a deep red robe to hold as the devil pull's him into the deep blue sea naked and traped for all eternity The soldier losses he's power of survival and the devil win's again and again though out eternity.

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[2] zodiac 25-May-04/4:57 AM Reply

intense. truly stellar. 10

[2] Enkidu 25-May-04/7:01 AM Reply

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Why do you even bother, this must have been written in a matter of forty-five seconds.
My shitty comment took longer than that. -2-