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Coldfront

by klosterfobik

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Sep 2004 · Edited 30 Sep 2004 · 13 comments

A southern sojourn of a northern wind, hastens downward searching late autumn again. To benumb November's hope - to declare December's lies. Comes unbending to trouble frostproof skies. Gladly returns so far south to deliver a sharp glacial shiver, through mild cloudless slendor of young guiltless lovers. To quickly coldly render warm dreams of you to winter.

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13 comments

[0] horus8 9-Sep-04/9:28 PM Reply
Margh...
[n/a] klosterfobik › horus8 10-Sep-04/6:54 AM Reply
Got English?
[0] Bachus 11-Sep-04/5:35 PM Reply
go
[n/a] klosterfobik › Bachus 11-Sep-04/5:57 PM Reply
to hell?
[n/a] ==Doylum › klosterfobik 11-Sep-04/6:10 PM Reply
NO to HULL!!!!!!
by 2nd class!!!!
splendid!!!!
[0] horus8 14-Sep-04/11:43 PM Reply
Just thought I'd come by and say hi motherfucker,
"hi motherfucker".
[8] fevriere 15-Sep-04/9:09 AM Reply
I love it, and yet I hate the apostrophised written-accent "x-in'".
[0] Shardik 15-Sep-04/11:30 AM Reply
Just
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> 15-Sep-04/2:29 PM Reply
A shitaco with extra sour cream
[10] deleted user 17-Sep-04/7:14 PM Reply
Nice
[10] deleted user 17-Sep-04/7:16 PM Reply
That's how they speak in the deep south.
[0] horus8 30-Sep-04/3:46 PM Reply
I bet you thought I wasn't going to push flush huh? because of your besplatterment of mine fine scrolls? Think again.
[9] INTRANSIT 1-Oct-04/6:33 AM Reply
Novembers hope. ql