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Bottom half of a phone (Free verse) by That One Forgive me if i sound indifferent tonite
Confidence escapes me
Ambiguity rapes me
And im sorry im sorry im not sure
If perserverance leaves me
Or contradictions decieve me
Your breath penetrates copper wires
Deftones at the side of me
Please don't cry in spite of me
Im positive that in the morning
You'll forget about me
Just another 7 seconds without me
But now the story ends
And you can blame this on me
But your still the lost part of me
Up the ladder:
Remember the Day
Down the ladder:
Fatso
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Posted: April 25, 2004 10:07 PM PDT; Last modified: April 25, 2004 10:07 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9761596 Overall Rank: 8364 Comments:
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 216.196.150.172
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25-Apr-04/10:21 PM
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A bit bland. Liven it up.
Circumcise yourselves to the LORD, and take away the foreskins of your heart, ye men of Judah and inhabitants of Jerusalem: lest my fury come forth like fire, and burn that none can quench it, because of the evil of your doings.
you are = you're
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