Bottom half of a phone

Member since 2004 · Posted 25 Apr 2004 · 3 comments

Forgive me if i sound indifferent tonite Confidence escapes me Ambiguity rapes me And im sorry im sorry im not sure If perserverance leaves me Or contradictions decieve me Your breath penetrates copper wires Deftones at the side of me Please don't cry in spite of me Im positive that in the morning You'll forget about me Just another 7 seconds without me But now the story ends And you can blame this on me But your still the lost part of me

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[6] thepinkbunnyofdoom 25-Apr-04/10:21 PM Reply

A bit bland. Liven it up.

[6] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 26-Apr-04/2:53 AM Reply

Circumcise yourselves to the LORD, and take away the foreskins of your heart, ye men of Judah and inhabitants of Jerusalem: lest my fury come forth like fire, and burn that none can quench it, because of the evil of your doings.

[6] Shuushin 26-Apr-04/7:14 PM Reply

you are = you're