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Bottom half of a phone (Free verse) by That One

Forgive me if i sound indifferent tonite Confidence escapes me Ambiguity rapes me And im sorry im sorry im not sure If perserverance leaves me Or contradictions decieve me Your breath penetrates copper wires Deftones at the side of me Please don't cry in spite of me Im positive that in the morning You'll forget about me Just another 7 seconds without me But now the story ends And you can blame this on me But your still the lost part of me

thepinkbunnyofdoom 25-Apr-04/10:21 PM
A bit bland. Liven it up.




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