Re: The Cowardice of Francis Evans by Caducus	19-Dec-05/12:28 AM
I liked the imagery, And I actually pictured hoarfrost in the first stanza.
Re: Blah Blah by Blindpoetry	19-Dec-05/12:22 AM
Your originality is refreshing in this world of mediocrity.
Re: Privacy by Dovina	19-Dec-05/12:20 AM
In the beginning it somehow reminded me of Alice's Restaurant.
Re: I love to see the sunrise by amanda_dcosta	19-Dec-05/12:17 AM
How do you have time to see the sunrise between waking your children? I see that you draw inspiration from your life, I'm glad to see that your life is inspirational.
Re: Lost Identity by TLRufener	19-Dec-05/12:14 AM
Wow!! Well done.
Re: Returning Home by Niphredil	19-Dec-05/12:13 AM
I often feel the same way, but not so eloquently.
Re: to move foward by ay deee	19-Dec-05/12:12 AM
At least there's that.
Re: Do Something by Miggy	19-Dec-05/12:10 AM
A fine dream, but not within our nature I fear.
Re: My kids by amanda_dcosta	19-Dec-05/12:08 AM
It didn't seem to smooth out until about a third of the way through, maybe it's just me.
Re: To Michelle by ALChemy	19-Dec-05/12:04 AM
This smacks of Poe, beautifully done, time well spent. May she rest in peace.
Re: Mixed Quartet by Dovina	19-Dec-05/12:01 AM
A carol for the masses eh?
Re: Bri's Room (not done) by Sunshine Conkey	18-Dec-05/11:48 PM
There is still room for improvement, as with everything.
Re: You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet	16-Dec-05/9:28 AM
I guess you can call essays poetry now huh? I don't know, you see, I'm porr also.
Re: Bri's Room (not done) by Sunshine Conkey	11-Dec-05/9:37 PM
Had an awful lot of stuff.
Re: i dream in nine minute increments by ay deee	7-Dec-05/7:56 PM
It's funny, lately my dreams have been lasting a lifetime. Long story. Now is not the time. I especially liked the first stanza.
Re: Jesus, you I see by amanda_dcosta	7-Dec-05/7:20 PM
A good way to live life.Knowing God is watching has a tendency to keep you honest.
Re: Better Off Dead by wilco	7-Dec-05/7:06 PM
But why pick that particular ending? Especially touching for me because it reaches into some not so distant memories of mine and wrings them out a bit. I likey.
Re: Hell is spring by INTRANSIT	12-Oct-05/12:07 AM
I don't know about you, but I spent all day shoveling 6' snow drifts. SPRING? Not in Peyton Colorado,
Re: Tonight’s Halloween by TLRufener	12-Oct-05/12:04 AM
Hello friend, still at it I see. Doing well.
Re: No More Autumn Poems (Edit) by Sasha	21-Aug-05/11:54 PM
A vivid picture, I felt it all the way through.I've tried three times tonight, just can't write. Sooo, this is what I would do with this. If you like all or any, welcome. What voice could sing in joy of death Each leaf as it withers and dies fluttering down to mingle with the soil keeping it's host alive. this fitting requiem