on The Cowardice of Francis Evans by Caducus
19 Dec 2005, 12:28 AM
I liked the imagery, And I actually pictured hoarfrost in the first stanza.
on Blah Blah by Blindpoetry
19 Dec 2005, 12:22 AM
Your originality is refreshing in this world of mediocrity.
on I love to see the sunrise by amanda_dcosta
19 Dec 2005, 12:17 AM
How do you have time to see the sunrise between waking your children? I see that you draw inspiration from your life, I'm glad to see that your life is inspirational.
on Lost Identity by TLRufener
19 Dec 2005, 12:14 AM
Wow!! Well done.
on Returning Home by Niphredil
19 Dec 2005, 12:13 AM
I often feel the same way, but not so eloquently.
on to move foward by ay deee
19 Dec 2005, 12:12 AM
At least there's that.
on Do Something by Miggy
19 Dec 2005, 12:10 AM
A fine dream, but not within our nature I fear.
on My kids by amanda_dcosta
19 Dec 2005, 12:08 AM
It didn't seem to smooth out until about a third of the way through, maybe it's just me.
on To Michelle by ALChemy
19 Dec 2005, 12:04 AM
This smacks of Poe, beautifully done, time well spent.
May she rest in peace.
May she rest in peace.
on Mixed Quartet by Dovina
19 Dec 2005, 12:01 AM
A carol for the masses eh?
on Bri's Room (not done) by Sunshine Conkey
18 Dec 2005, 11:48 PM
There is still room for improvement, as with everything.
on You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet
16 Dec 2005, 9:28 AM
I guess you can call essays poetry now huh? I don't know, you see, I'm porr also.
on Bri's Room (not done) by Sunshine Conkey
11 Dec 2005, 9:37 PM
Had an awful lot of stuff.
on i dream in nine minute increments by ay deee
7 Dec 2005, 7:56 PM
It's funny, lately my dreams have been lasting a lifetime. Long story. Now is not the time.
I especially liked the first stanza.
I especially liked the first stanza.
on Jesus, you I see by amanda_dcosta
7 Dec 2005, 7:20 PM
A good way to live life.Knowing God is watching has a tendency to keep you honest.
on Better Off Dead by wilco
7 Dec 2005, 7:06 PM
But why pick that particular ending? Especially touching for me because it reaches into some not so distant memories of mine and wrings them out a bit.
I likey.
I likey.
on Hell is spring by INTRANSIT
12 Oct 2005, 12:07 AM
I don't know about you, but I spent all day shoveling 6' snow drifts. SPRING? Not in Peyton Colorado,
on Tonightâs Halloween by TLRufener
12 Oct 2005, 12:04 AM
Hello friend, still at it I see. Doing well.
on No More Autumn Poems (Edit) by Sasha
21 Aug 2005, 11:54 PM
A vivid picture, I felt it all the way through.I've tried three times tonight, just can't write. Sooo, this is what I would do with this. If you like all or any, welcome.
What voice could sing in joy of death
Each leaf as it withers and dies
fluttering down to mingle with the soil
keeping it's host alive.
this fitting requiem
What voice could sing in joy of death
Each leaf as it withers and dies
fluttering down to mingle with the soil
keeping it's host alive.
this fitting requiem