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Bri's Room (not done) (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey
A little girl named Bri had an awful lot of stuff she saved and saved it but it wasn't enough. She put it in a closet and stacked it on the floor But even when her room was filled She wanted more and more. One day while playing She wanted her special pen to draw her favorite doll. But after looking everywhere, she couldn't find them at all.

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Posted: December 11, 2005 4:01 PM PST; Last modified: December 12, 2005 7:01 AM PST
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[8] sliver @ 172.196.162.4 | 11-Dec-05/9:37 PM | Reply
Had an awful lot of stuff.
[n/a] Sunshine Conkey @ 205.188.116.198 > sliver | 12-Dec-05/7:02 AM | Reply
your right, it did sound better that way....so I edited it, which meant the voting score you gave me is now gone.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 | 12-Dec-05/12:20 PM | Reply
Please do us the small courtesy of waiting until you've finished the poem before posting it.
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 12-Dec-05/7:34 PM | Reply
Yep, Just like my niece.

Look at the first word of every line. Do you see anything monotonous?
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > ALChemy | 12-Dec-05/7:42 PM | Reply
"The principal cause of disparities in the fortunes of men is intelligence."
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > zodiac | 12-Dec-05/8:31 PM | Reply
Then how do we explain our misfortunes?
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 64.12.116.138 > ALChemy | 12-Dec-05/8:59 PM | Reply
Notice he said MEN...*smirk
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 64.12.116.138 > LilMsLadyPoet | 12-Dec-05/9:06 PM | Reply
...Reaganomics?
...Bush Policy?
...The dog-eat-dog mentality embraced by said men?

[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 64.12.116.138 > LilMsLadyPoet | 12-Dec-05/9:08 PM | Reply
Okay...I gotta say it>druuuuummmmm rooooole....women! LOLOLOL!
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > LilMsLadyPoet | 12-Dec-05/9:07 PM | Reply
Maybe it was a woman that said it. The quoted person wasn't named.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 64.12.116.138 > ALChemy | 12-Dec-05/9:14 PM | Reply
Yes...but Zodiac pulled it out of his funny little hat...to insert here.

"The principal cause of disparities in the fortunes of men is intelligence." he asserts, (by the fact that he stated it or quoted it.) He does not go on to state how said intellegence creates said disparity...perhpas his assumption is that intellegent men have less fortune? I would be most amused if one day he threw out a thought, such as this one, and then backed it up with a thought or analysis of his own.

[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 13-Dec-05/1:52 AM | Reply
I'll answer both of you:

Al, you haven't seen the rest of the world. With a few exceptions, we're the intellectual powerhouses.

LilMsLady, I've asserted nothing. Quotes are never, ever, necessarily assertions. As it happens, I believe one of the main differences between people with good fortunes and people with bad fortunes is intelligence. There. Now I've asserted something. But good fortune is obviously the cause of intelligence, not the other way around. (I'm comfortable saying that, despite being a broke unemployed kid with a Masters; I did go to private school most of my childhood, after all.)

And what kind of intelligence? I can think of three or four kinds mostly unrelated to knowing the capital of North Dakota or stepping into the street in front of a bus.

Obviously, you should now ask me to back up "good fortune is the cause of intelligence".
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.137.42 > zodiac | 13-Dec-05/8:59 AM | Reply
Please do! I do not believe good fortune (ie: wealth, money) is the Cause of intellegence. I couldn't disagree more!(If you mean:I have had the good fortune to be raised in a family with good fortune and money, therefore it has afforded me an intellgence above average.")
(If you mean good fortune to mean fate, genes..then yes...as in: "I have had the good fortune to be born into an intellgent family.") That staement would apply.
Bad fortune is the cause, means, and ways to gaining experience and intellegence. When one fails, stumbles, and questions, then one learns something new. (The exception being those who literally live in a survivalist mode, as they have no time for thought past the food or need they must procure for themselves for the day.)
Good fortune (ie: money, wealth) pays for EDUCATION (the generically produced, propoganda-laden one sponsored by the collective forces that be), but money can not buy, nor breed intellgence!
Comfort, via good fortune, does not compell one to investigation, experimentation, innovation, invention...etc.
When all is said and done, genes play the bigger part in intellegence than any other one marker. And anyone who is inherantly intellegent will be driven to educate one's self.That drive and curiousity, being a distinct marker of that intellegence.
I am of the firm belief that educating a man past his intellegence level is a dangerous thing. It creates monsters, who know they are given the position of power that surpasses their inborn capacity and intellectual worth, they know that those under them many times are actually above them....not a good thing...they become caustic, to themselves, and to anyone around them who hold the real power of intellgence. Ever read Fountain Head, or Atlas Shrugged? Point made.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 13-Dec-05/9:41 AM | Reply
Perhaps I've made it sound like I'm saying financial good fortune is the only cause of intelligence, or only people from well-off backgrounds are intelligent, or no poor people are. I'm saying none of these things.

It is, however, easily proveable that
(1) on average, people from wealthier backgrounds score higher IQs than people from poorer backgrounds,
(2) education has a direct influence on IQ scores, even though IQ is supposed to test some natural intelligence separate from mere learned information or skills.

That's not a particularly pleasant (or even useful) thing to say. But it's true.

I see no basis for saying bad fortune causes intelligence. I've lived among all kinds of poor, middle-class, and upper-class people, and not seen any extra intelligence on the parts of poorer peoples. From personal experience I can tell you the only thing keeping 90% of Arabs alive right now is stubborn adherence to traditional ways of doing things - ways modern Arabs have no intelligence, or understanding, about. Anyway, I've seen the studies. The differences continue right across the board.

I think we can agree we're not talking about KNOWLEDGE (ie, long division, or the elusive capital of North Dakota); we're talking about intelligence, which *should* be (and mostly is) a measure of problem-solving, critical-thinking, and pattern-finding abilities, among other things distinct from knowledge. These shouldn't be affected by standardized education, but they are. Wealthier people have greater access to education; ergo, higher IQ on average.

Comfort is the greatest promoter of innovation. Otherwise, how is America (and, specifically, moderately well-off America) the leader in every kind of innovation, while NO poor country or culture has innovated anything of note since fire? Yes, America has more resources and opener social norms pushing for innovation, but how did America get those resources and norms. Mostly by innovation. On another track, I bet you'd be hard-pressed to name 5 political, artistic, or technological innovators who weren't from well-off backgrounds, if not well-off at the time of their innovations.

I don't have the figures with me, but if I were forced to guess (at gunpoint, natch,) I'd say the statistical difference between various income levels' IQs is greater than the difference across genetic lines. Otherwise, how do you explain that America (ie, the most diverse genetic pool ever) is more intelligent by every measure than, say, Japan (ie, a more-or-less homogenous group proven to be genetically inclined toward intelligence)?

I don't agree with any of the rest of your comment, for reasons which should be obvious. Making a point with Ayn Rand? That's shaky. Very shaky.
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > zodiac | 13-Dec-05/12:55 PM | Reply
Making conclusions from polls and stats is shaky. Were the IQ tests written or oral(most likely written if on a national scale)? I scored 30 points higher on my oral IQ test than on my written. Like I said, shaky.
I think you'll find as life teaches you over the years that the average number of rich dumb people to rich poor people is about the same as it is with poor or middle class folks. Ther are so many factors that go into intelligence that to make any big deal out of just one of them as if it's a major factor is just silly.
Lincoln, Einstein, Da Vinci, Poe and even Edison were from poor or middle class at best origins. If anything the most influencial people in the world tended to be born middle class.
Most likely because they had access to education but weren't spoiled into complacency.
Darwin can tell you why Americans appear to be smarter than the Japanese. That and most of the smartest Japenese people move to America and become Americans thus increasing our IQ.

Don't get me wrong. Money certainly is an important factor and motivation for knowledge but it's like saying you're less of a man when you don't have a wife when you say your poor so you're likely to be dumb.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > ALChemy | 13-Dec-05/1:18 PM | Reply
Obviously IQ tests are biased for writing (and for white Western males!) However, how else are you going to define intelligence besides, 'the thing that intelligence tests measure'? Be sure to make your result empirically testable and measurable.

SOME CHICK USER: Testing and measuring is SO white, Western male!

ZODIAC: Yes, but without empiricism things tend to get sort of squishy around here.

SOME CHICK USER: We like squishy!

ZODIAC: That's fine. But the moment you thought you could handle a systematic argument on the matter, you chucked your hat in the ring of empiricism. You can't get out now. No, wait, you can. And should. Just say, Out, out, and rub your hands with an obsessive scrubbing motion.
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > zodiac | 13-Dec-05/1:59 PM | Reply
That's what I mean. It's futile. There are just to many factors, to much room for biasness. The testing is important in that it little by little narrows the margin. Maybe some day we will have done enough unbias testing that we can feel safe to reach some sort of conclusion but till then we're just jumping to one.
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > ALChemy | 13-Dec-05/1:46 PM | Reply
The world cares very little about what a man or woman knows; it is what the man or woman is able to do that counts. - Booker T. Washington

Well done is better than well said. - Benjamin Franklin

He is rich or poor according to what he is, not according to what he has. - Henry Ward Beecher

It's easy to make a buck. It's tougher to make a difference. - Tom Brokaw

Throughout the centuries there were men who took first steps down new roads armed with nothing but their own vision. - Ayn Rand

and my personal favorite:

The longer I live the more I see that I am never wrong about anything, and that all the pains that I have so humbly taken to verify my notions have only wasted my time. - George Bernard Shaw
[7] wilco @ 24.92.74.122 > ALChemy | 13-Dec-05/4:37 PM | Reply
Bitches ain't shit but ho's and tricks - Dr. Dre
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > wilco | 13-Dec-05/4:49 PM | Reply
I knew I forgot one. Thanks.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.137.206 > ALChemy | 15-Dec-05/7:41 PM | Reply
"Those of you who think you know it all are very annoying to those of us who do."> Some Smart Ass (Who was undoubtedly not in power, nor rich, but who was highly intellegent and deserved to be!)
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 15-Dec-05/7:53 PM | Reply
Oh, great. Nothing trumps facts like... random sourceless quotes!!!
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.137.206 > zodiac | 15-Dec-05/8:32 PM | Reply
I am sure if the source had had money then his statement would have been attributed to him, because then he would have had the money to patent the saying, thus securing his right to claim said intelligence...with royalty money forthcoming to ensure his continued wealth, and more intelligence to bestow upon his prodigy.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/4:31 AM | Reply
What, as a Quote-Seller? Oh, a Quote-*Patenter*.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.137.206 > zodiac | 15-Dec-05/10:13 PM | Reply
But...I thought we were on a quotefest...seems you listed quite a few in a list...oh, do we have to only quote people who were rich, famous, and well-known? Was there a problem, since mine was sourceless? Does that make it any less valid, especially considering the context in which it was quoted? Sorry, no one told me the rules. I thought you'd appreciate a 'reply quote' since you use them so often.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/4:33 AM | Reply
re "rich, famous, and well-known"

You didn't know who de Tocqueville was. Most poemranker users probably still don't. So what's the difference?
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > zodiac | 16-Dec-05/6:02 AM | Reply
Tocqueville: What we called our dorm room in Art School right after we smoked some rightious weed.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.139.10 > ALChemy | 16-Dec-05/3:49 PM | Reply
We called our 'smoker's hill' the same! LOL
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.139.10 > zodiac | 16-Dec-05/3:11 PM | Reply
I did not know the quote belonged to him,
and what is the difference, indeed.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.137.206 > zodiac | 15-Dec-05/8:27 PM | Reply
Read AlChemy's response, I ditto that. As to Ayn Rand...I don't think that is shaky at all, she was a highly intellegent woman that experienced socialism, and democracy, and had a very clear understanding of all the shades between the two. Even if one does not agree with her philosophy in its entirety, one can not (should not)dismiss the things to be learned within her stories, thoughts, and discussions. That said,your comment of "Comfort is the greatest promoter of innovation." seems to be another assertion you state as fact, when in fact, it is opinion -yours.(You state:"Comfort is..." not "I believe comfort promotes...") I would venture to share my opinion: DIScomfort, (being UNcomfortable with the limits of one's available methods,) combined with intellegence, is the greatest promoter of invention and innovation.
ps. Not seeing the point of Ayn Rand? That's shaky. Very shaky.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/4:37 AM | Reply
No, I'm not saying one should dismiss all of Ayn Rand's ideas. However, if one of Ayn Rand's ideas was that educating people beyond their "intelligence levels" makes them monsters, I think one should dismiss that.

I love Ayn Rand, and daresay I've read more of her, and more thoroughly, than you have. But I've come to see most of her ideas as kinda silly and simplistic, or at the very best limited to an antiquated "captains of industry" view of things.
[n/a] Niphredil @ 192.115.56.3 > zodiac | 16-Dec-05/4:56 AM | Reply
Just out of curiosity, how exactly do you plan to go about educating an individual past his/her intelligence level? If they don't understand a concept, would you just say, 'I guess you're simply not smart enough to grasp this, let's move on to something else?'

Incidentally, Ayn Rand never said anything like that. What she states is that each individual should strive to create the best he could to the best of his ability. "Over-education for the un-intelligent" necessarily places bounds on the limits which a person can achieve, and is therefore diametrically opposed to what Ayn Rand is stating.

P.S. And it's "intelligent", with two 'i's.
[n/a] Niphredil @ 192.115.56.3 > Niphredil | 16-Dec-05/4:57 AM | Reply
this was for LittleMsLady, zodiac, sorry.
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > Niphredil | 16-Dec-05/5:21 AM | Reply
I think Flowers for Agernon covered this topic pretty well already. For those of you unfamiliar with the story see Stephen Kings Lawnmower Man.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.139.10 > ALChemy | 16-Dec-05/3:48 PM | Reply
I read a bunch of those books... Flowers for Agernon was one of my morbidly favorite books of all time.
And LawnMower Man..whew...it's wild. I like them both...though i am not sure how they relate to this topic...I don't see the connection to educating past inteligence level....?
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.139.10 > Niphredil | 16-Dec-05/3:42 PM | Reply
I promise I will scan through and find the passage if you trly want me to...I have been on a re-read-A-thon of all her stuff, so I am not sure where it is, but I believe in Fountainhead, and then resaid again in Virtue of Selfishness, I think.
Crap...I ALWAYS mispell it...that, and carress...caress...see?!
Mispelling things speaks to lack of education or motivation to be careful,it does not indicate lack of intelligence. (I admit I had to go back, take out the E again, and put in the I!)
I believe the statement is more about educating someone beyond their capacity to understand the responsibility one should assume, when one has risen in power and position because of the education he has been afforded. With great knowledge comes great responsibility. Intelligence refers to the innate ability to process and use the education one gains in a way that benefits one's slef and others. Educating a person beyond his ability to understand the responsibility that comes with increated knowledge leads to people of power who do not deserve to be in power, who do not know how to apply the knowledge they have, and who often do more harm to themselves and others than they would have had they not risen beyond a level they could fully undertstand.
(The current president kinda exemplifies my point.)
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.139.10 > zodiac | 16-Dec-05/3:25 PM | Reply
Contrary to what is posted here, she said as much, indeed.
I have read, some several times: Fountain Head, Atlas Shrugged, Anthem, The Virtue of Selfishness, Introduction to Objectivist Epistemology (Expanded 2nd. Edition, and am currently waiting on a copy of Capitalism: The Unknown Ideal, so that I may have a copy for my library, and to read again....thank you very much.
She wrote from her perspective and time...one must always take that into account when reading authors from a different time period than one lives in. There was nothing simplistic about her. She was very concrete, and not very compassionate. I think if she lived in our time, and had had the gift of time, she would have grown and expanded her philosophy to better reflect what could be learned from the time of her death until now.
That aside...she was an owesome writer, who did what no one else had done: formed heroic characters, and formulated a new philosophy to base her characters on. She was astoundingly intellegent...and one can embrace certain of her principles, without embracing them to a fanatical degree.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/3:58 PM | Reply
Yes, of course. No one here has suggested Ayn Rand wasn't a good writer, wasn't intelligent, wasn't writing from her perspective or for her time, et cetera, et cetera. No one has even said Ayn Rand was simplistic. If you think anyone has said these things, please, please go back and read our messages.

At the risk of putting this conversation even further off track, I'll tell you what I don't like about Ayn Rand's ideas: Her books often overwhelmingly measure success (in life, as an egoist, etc) by characters' contributions to INDUSTRY only. I'm not ignoring her books' positively portrayed writers, artists, and even regular businesspeople, but I wish they'd gotten more play (not to mention, come off better in the end). Personally, I consider myself living a satisfactorily Randian life under the radar with my wife and my normal job, without having to measure my greatness by the size of my skyscraper.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.139.10 > zodiac | 16-Dec-05/4:26 PM | Reply
I love Ayn Rand, and daresay I've read more of her, and more thoroughly, than you have. But I've come to see most of her ideas as kinda silly and simplistic, or at the very best limited to an antiquated "captains of industry" view of things.
Okay, you said her IDEAS were simplistic. I stand corrected. ( I made the assumption one would think her simplistic, if her ideas were seen as simplistic.)
and continuing off topic...yes, I agree that she did not value non-industrialists as much as I would have liked her to. She did give value to the 'little' things people do, in Atlas Shrugged, when the great characters grew food,etc. in their hidden place.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/5:04 PM | Reply
Yeah, but it seems like she thinks if you're great you've got to have a factory and a penthouse office somewhere. Excuse me if I don't go in for that game.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/4:53 AM | Reply
(1) Of course, this is all "opinions". That is, none of this has been confirmed by God to be true. It's not going to be useful to add "In my opinion" to everything we say.

(2) That said, it's obvious I've been talking about the best available knowledge on the subject, while you've been talking about what you wish was true. Consider this: If new evidence came out on the matter, I'd revise my opinions accordingly. Yet no amount of evidence, I'd wager, could make you change your opinions on this subject. Does that sound like a very strong position to be coming from?
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.139.10 > zodiac | 16-Dec-05/4:05 PM | Reply
Academically and intellectually gifted children are identified throughout student populations, among the poor and uneducated, and from homes where the parents are illiterate. This I know to be a fact. I have been involved in gathering stories of children that far exceed their circumstances. An AIG teacher and services coordinator identified a pocket of AIG children, within rural NC, who were African-American, many performing below grade level, and from homes far below the poverty level. Every study you seem to believe would counter the situation I just stated. I believe that it is not a matter of high intelligence not existing in the population. I think that the problem lies in the fact that no one is really looking! I have personally seen SO many situations and people that go against what you state. Have I (and others) been, seemingly against all odds, finding high IQ’s among the poor? Do we identify those who somehow beat the ‘odds’, ‘averages’, and ‘findings of studies’? If you start with an assumption, then you can find a study somewhere to support your statement.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.139.10 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/4:20 PM | Reply
And no amount of your "It's obvious I've been talking about the very best knowledge on the subject..." can refute what I see with my own eyes. If you stated there were a thousand studies stating that dogs don't exist, should that make anyone disbelieve their own eyes? I have seen what I have seen. I have seen, with my own eyes, what others have seen and pointed out to me. I will never let 'education' deny what my own intelligence shows me. And I believe in looking at things people state as fact, weighing what I know about the subject, exploring it further if there is a discrepancy, and coming to my own conclusion based on the facts I gather. I submit this is an intelligent manner with which to educate ones self.
I am done with this conversation.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/4:24 PM | Reply
You're still not getting it.

If I said, thousands of studies prove the average dog is brown, you'd answer, I've seen two white dogs myself.

I'm glad this conversation's over. I haven't heard you say anything except what you WISH was true. As all those things are what I wish was true, too, I don't feel that I've learned anything new.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/4:20 PM | Reply
Yes, of course. Except it's PROVEN that more academically gifted students are "identified" more often in better-off classrooms, and special needs students are "identified" more often in poorer classrooms. Trust me. My wife is a nationally-known expert in special education. [Ms zodiac: Oh, yes, that's right.]

Yes, there are thousands of stories about poor children exceeding their circumstances. NO ONE HAS SAID THIS IS NOT THE CASE. THE CASE IS THAT FOR EVERY DISADVANTAGED STUDENT WHO'S "ACADEMICALLY GIFTED", THREE ADVANTAGED STUDENTS ARE. You cannot disprove that.

So, to make sure we're on the same page:

1) Many poor people have high IQs.
2) Many rich people have low IQs.
3) You don't understand what averages mean.
4) You cannot "find a study somewhere" to support any given assumption. For example, YOU, LilMsLadyPoet, cannot find a study to support your assumptions. QED. One assumption you should try finding a study to support is the assumption, "If you start with an assumption, then you can find a study somewhere to support your statement." Good luck.
[7] wilco @ 24.92.74.122 > LilMsLadyPoet | 13-Dec-05/2:33 PM | Reply
It seems to me that "wealth, money" are more often than not, the cause of amesome stupidity.
[7] wilco @ 24.92.74.122 > wilco | 13-Dec-05/2:34 PM | Reply
see..I got paid today and now I can't spell awesome.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > wilco | 13-Dec-05/2:36 PM | Reply
A more powerful stupidity, certainly. A stockbroker makes a bad decision and people starve. Tim Burton remakes a great old movie and people suffer. It's a terrible burden, wealth, I'm sure.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 13-Dec-05/1:43 AM | Reply
Technically, de Tocqueville did.
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > zodiac | 13-Dec-05/3:12 AM | Reply
I'm thinking the campaign your on is for responsible citizenship as de Tocqueville would put it. Lord knows we could start with our president. de Tocqueville's got a nice fish out of water perspective of America.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.137.42 > ALChemy | 13-Dec-05/9:14 AM | Reply
I'm sorry, but when I see the words 'socialism and civic responsibility'...'institutions' that 'collectively' mandate you help a worthless neighbor, that you OWE something to anybody who has his hand out, that your sweat, labour, and reward should be used to raise 'the collective' of people needing your assistance...well...I stop listening. Responsible citizenship, to me, does not mean "responsible to and for the citizens".
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > LilMsLadyPoet | 13-Dec-05/12:06 PM | Reply
He was writing it about American Democracy and why it prospered where others failed.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.137.206 > ALChemy | 15-Dec-05/8:13 PM | Reply
I know, Alchemy, but as I have a feeling you know, American democracy has moved far from it's original idealistic beginings. We move closer to socialism, growing in apathy and contempt for the corruption that eats away at its wholesome core, and watch as freedoms are whittled away chip by chip. When money buys power and presidents, when people buy into the belief that intellegence belongs to the wealthy, and when people no longer feel they have control of their own destinies, then Democracy, as powerful as we know it capable of being, will fail to be what it should be. So much of what people say, in order to explain Democracy, actually implies or states a mandate that one man owes another a hand out in order to raise the whole (collective). Democracy was founded on the thought that every man should have the absolute right to his own property, earned through his own effort and labor. If a man is ordered to give away (mandated by law) any of his property to another man, because the other man does not have it, then the man that succeeds is punished for succeeding, and the man that fails is rewarded for his failure. It is a brute government of thugs that takes from a man what is rightfully his and gives it to a man that has not worked for it. I do understand the sense of community that is spoken of and how that helps build democracy. But when that sense of community is spoken of in words that imply an absolute responsibilty for your neighbor, and language that mandates each man must think of and live in such a way that supports the individuals and collective of his community, first and before himself -then it smacks of going down a slippery road, to me.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/4:59 AM | Reply
In my opinion, you don't have a very good idea what socialism is. You seem to think it has something to do with money buying power and presidents.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.139.10 > zodiac | 16-Dec-05/3:45 PM | Reply
"When money buys power and presidents, when people buy into the belief that intellegence belongs to the wealthy, and when people no longer feel they have control of their own destinies, then Democracy, as powerful as we know it capable of being, will fail to be what it should be."
Perhaps you did not read clearly? Sees you are taking things out of context.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/4:07 PM | Reply
Oh. Forgive me for trying to place that quote in the context of a discussion on socialism, when you were apparently just talking at random. You can see how I made that mistake:

1. American democracy is moving from idealism.
2. It's moving closer to socialism.
3. Money buys power and presidents.
4. People think democracy means owing people handouts.
5. But it doesn't.
6. Corrupt [and bought] government takes your property to give it as handouts.
7. But that's socialism.

Is this not the gist of your aboveposted comment?

PS-This is all very swell for one apparently raised on welfare.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.137.6 > zodiac | 19-Dec-05/7:29 PM | Reply
I never said I was raised on welfare, only that my mother was on welfare while pursueing her masters. There is a difference. And I wrote, in loosely-poetic form the change I believe should be taken, from hand-out to hand-up, by those wishing to do so.
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/5:38 AM | Reply
Yes it does make you long for the days when industrial and agricultural greed forced us into civil war and then later into the great depression.
[n/a] Everyone @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 13-Dec-05/2:11 PM | Reply
Do you mind my asking, how old are you?
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.137.206 > Everyone | 15-Dec-05/9:05 PM | Reply
I wonder who you are asking. And since you asked, I wonder how old you are. And I wonder why you don't want to process the conversation on its merits without wanting to pigeon-hole people into little boxes of age, and thus supposed perspective.
I am old enough to know better, and young enough to still chance it.
I am an ancient soul as old as time, with generations of children behind me; But I am child forever standing in wonderment at the miracle of beauty and life that stretches on into eternity and infinity.
I am all that there is and yet I am nothing compared to what is.
I have walked millions of miles and talked zillions of whiles and yet I've just begun to walk.
How old are you?
[n/a] Everyone @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/4:57 AM | Reply
I'm 26. Apparently you did mind my asking, so forget it.
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 13-Dec-05/2:28 PM | Reply
That's all well and good, and I'm as egotist (or egoist, I always forget which,) as the next guy. But what would you say if I suggested that your future is very much in the hands of those people you refuse to feed? (Don't believe me? What are you paying for gas recently?)

What if the odds are very high that you or someone you know will be blown up by some worthless guy you didn't hand out to? Are handouts justfied if they might prevent that?
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.137.206 > zodiac | 15-Dec-05/8:56 PM | Reply
Again, I would refer you to Ayn Rand...she says it as eloquently as I could vere suppose to. I do not think it benefits anyone to pay off thugs. I do not believe in giving in to extortion and corruption, for to do so only encourages more. i do not believe in violence unless acted violently upon. In order to TAKE what they want they would have to take up arms. In that case, it is clearly wrong. Why give them sanction and a (false?) sense of power by GIVING it to them? Will it stop them from coming back to take more? No. They will be back, asking for more. (ie: Korea, etc) I say my future should not be in the hands of anyone but me. I say that to be subject to anyone who holds a gun to your head is against man's best interest. I say if they want it, then come and TAKE it, if they dare, and let them suffer the consequences if they choose that route.
America, and myself, personally, should never pay extortionists and thugs who seek to take what does not belong to them. Your statement about handouts is based on the assumption that a handout would prevent violence. Such an assumption is wrong. Eventually, if you give and give, you run out of what they want, or you refuse out of necessity, or they come to take all you have and are...then what? Violence and defending yourself would be necessary. Paying off someone to leave you unmolested never works...thugs always come back for more. Handouts only appease for a short while. Paying extortionists prevent nothing; it only prolongs the inevitable. You use the term 'worthless guy'; I ask, Why would you want to sustain and support someone who is worthless and a thug?
Give a man a fish and you feed him for today, and he shows up to be fed again tomorrow, resenting you because he needs you.
Teach a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime, and he goes away your friend.
"Lie down with dogs, get up with fleas."
[n/a] zodiac @ 69.132.67.140 > LilMsLadyPoet | 16-Dec-05/5:32 AM | Reply
Why don't you read your Fountainhead Anniversary preface again? A lot of this ground has already been covered.

For one, your refusal to hand out is partly what made them thugs. And we're not talking about giving food to Osama; we're talking about giving food to the moderate Muslim before he radicalizes and carries Osama's bomb into, say, Concord Mills (www.concordmills.com ). That's not giving into extortion, since the future bomber is currently not an enemy. My question is, if you can prevent him from becoming an enemy, at a very low cost, isn't that the self-interested thing to do?

For two, it's all well and good to be so high-minded, until some guy shoots you for your TV. Roarkian as I'm sure you are, you will not be able to stop him from shooting you. Nor will you be able to stop the bomber from blowing you up in Concord Mills. However you look at it, the self-interested position is to stop him from wanting to kill you before he tries and succeeds.

re [North] Korea, etc: Yes, we're conceding tons *after* they've already become an enemy and extortionist. Of course they're going to just ask for more without changing their policies; they have no incentive not to. And yes, there's very little supporting information, as far as world politics go, for the notion that handing out *before* one becomes an enemy works, mostly because governments aren't very good at doing that. There is, however, this: Since 1998, at-risk youth outreach programs in NC have reduced incarcerations for juvenile delinquents by 65%, have lowered recidivism and gang application across the board, and have significantly increased college enrollment by at-risk youth, at the expense of about $8 million (since 1998). That means, for less than 14 cents per year for the last 7 years, you've been able to reduce crime - ie, the risk that you'll have your self-interest compromised by some gun-weilding mugger.

What have you got to compare with that? "Give a man a fish" :-(

This has nothing to do with wealth=intelligence, and a lot to do, I suspect, with being your pet tirade. Let's go back to what we were originally talking about, okay?
[n/a] Niphredil @ 192.114.81.70 > LilMsLadyPoet | 17-Dec-05/6:07 AM | Reply
Incidentally (sorry for changing the subject), you say,
"Give a man a fish and you feed him for today, and he shows up to be fed again tomorrow, resenting you because he needs you.
Teach a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime, and he goes away your friend. "

Isn't this a contradiction to your claim that people shouldn't be over-educated? I want to educate all the people so that they have the tools to support themselves and their families, i.e, learn to fish. You say, "don't bother, they're not intelligent enough, and they will only harm themselves." I can't help seeing a glaring contradiction here, sorry.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.137.6 > Niphredil | 19-Dec-05/7:41 PM | Reply
Over-educated would not include teaching a man to fish.
Over-educated or educated past his intelligence level is more like giving some idiot, with an IQ of 75 and an 18th century idealogy, the means, plans, and instruction/education to make nuclear reactors and warheads. He has no ability to grasp the responsibility or concequences inherent in such information. He will use it as a neanderthal would be expected to: with lack of planning, judgement and wisdom. He may be able to understand how to put one together and how to use it, but he can not grasp the analytical reasoning one should have in order to be entrusted with the use of such information. This would be a clear example of educating a man past his intelligence level. With the results being easy to guess.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 64.12.116.67 | 12-Dec-05/9:03 PM | Reply
This reminds me of some childrens poetry. The premise is cute; I know a Bri, who is a bit of an artist with stuff everywhere. But, that said...even childrens poetry should not be mundane...keep working at it and you'll have something of quailty to give them!
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 64.12.116.138 > LilMsLadyPoet | 12-Dec-05/9:15 PM | Reply
yeah, I know...my spelling is fine...it's my typing that suffers when I'm tired!
[n/a] Sunshine Conkey @ 64.12.116.138 > LilMsLadyPoet | 13-Dec-05/1:02 PM | Reply
This was for my 5 yr old grand-daughter BRIanna & my youngest daughter, saBRIna. They share a room.
[7] wilco @ 24.92.74.122 | 13-Dec-05/4:40 PM | Reply
Ok, it's a children's poem...I can get with that...until I saw that comment, I thought you were a retarded.
[4] nentwined @ 64.60.192.131 | 13-Dec-05/4:56 PM | Reply
first two stanzas are cute. third really breaks the flow in an unpleasant way.
[8] sliver @ 172.199.242.198 | 18-Dec-05/11:48 PM | Reply
There is still room for improvement, as with everything.
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