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Bri's Room (not done) (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey

A little girl named Bri had an awful lot of stuff she saved and saved it but it wasn't enough. She put it in a closet and stacked it on the floor But even when her room was filled She wanted more and more. One day while playing She wanted her special pen to draw her favorite doll. But after looking everywhere, she couldn't find them at all.

zodiac 16-Dec-05/4:24 PM
You're still not getting it.

If I said, thousands of studies prove the average dog is brown, you'd answer, I've seen two white dogs myself.

I'm glad this conversation's over. I haven't heard you say anything except what you WISH was true. As all those things are what I wish was true, too, I don't feel that I've learned anything new.




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