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Tonight’s Halloween

Member since 2004 · Posted 11 Oct 2005 · 5 comments

I wonder what it’s like, To feel that I belong here. It feels as though, I am alone. The sun sometimes, Will burn me. The clouds can’t, Block out the light. When the sun goes down, A dark night comes in. The cold air feels good, As I breathe it in. In the light I’m alone, But the dark night feels like home. As the darkness consumes, The world around me. All the ghosts and witches, The skeletons and vampires. Come out tonight, To be scary and mean. For tonight they can party, Because tonight’s Halloween.

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5 comments

[8] sliver 12-Oct-05/12:04 AM Reply
Hello friend, still at it I see. Doing well.
[n/a] ALChemy 12-Oct-05/3:00 PM Reply
By your login name I wouldn't think a gother.
[n/a] TLRufener › ALChemy 12-Oct-05/3:23 PM Reply
Never assume about those whom you know not.
[n/a] zodiac › TLRufener 13-Oct-05/2:04 AM Reply
By your diction I would think you're Meat Loaf.
[n/a] TLRufener › zodiac 13-Oct-05/4:29 PM Reply
Thank you.