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Jesus, you I see (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta
Jesus in my life I see
Touching every part of me
With His grace - abundantly
Jesus, you I see.
My life goes through
With ups and downs
Unfurling times of tears and laughs
In all of this, there's not a doubt
Jesus, you I see.
With every step or act of mine
There's someone else, someone divine
Who guides me through to be my best
Jesus you I see.
Each time the sun shines brightly
Or sets at dusk each day,
Each time the sun goes twinkling by
Or seems to rest up there,
Each time the clouds grow bigger
And then begin to rain;
Astoundingly, its evident
Jesus, you I see.
In family, who love me,
In friends who share my life,
In nature all around me
In land and sea and sky,
No matter where I seem to be
At work or play or sleep
You're always there my one true friend...
You're Jesus! You I see!
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.625
Weighted score: 4.899147
Overall Rank: 9896
Posted: December 5, 2005 10:43 PM PST; Last modified: December 5, 2005 10:43 PM PST
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My personal favorite hymn:
I don't care if it rains or freezes
as long as I got my plastic Jesus.
Can I getta AMEN sista?
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http://www.poetrypower.com/poetry.htm
Best links I could find so far. Knowing what is what can only make your poetry better which is pretty good so far I might add.
If it sounds like a good song you'll tend to get a higher vote because people are used to lyrics not translating to print well.