Poemranker [Poem: Sonnet Eighteen] [by devilishnutcase] Sun Apr 28 03:43:25 PDT 2024

Shall I compare yardbird and shakespere today, It stikes me as odd as they sound quite the same, Plagerising sonnet 18 is quite lame, Get a life yardbird please recite your aim, The words that you write are 400 years to late, All the requote you borrow won't get you a date, So whip out that playboy and please masterbate, Try as you might to be amused at most, Next time don't fuck with Shakesperes ghost, Stop butt fucking Sonnet 18, Calling it your own, You'll have much more luck sucking your bone,

[0] nentwined @ 192.168.0.250 | 7-Jan-04/12:39 AM | Reply

what crack _are_ you smoking? or whose?

[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.161.86 > nentwined | 7-Jan-04/1:02 AM | Reply

It isn't my crack.

Time displacement isn't one of its side effects..yardbird hasn't posted since.. hell, I don't even remember.. this fuckers late, probably just woke from his coma.

[n/a] devilishnutcase @ 65.156.178.70 > nentwined | 7-Jan-04/1:06 AM | Reply

I am highly amused by your retort. But thanks for the lackadaisical comments .

[6] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 7-Jan-04/8:32 PM | Reply

4 for the comments 2 for the psuedo-sonnet.

[6] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 | 19-May-04/7:40 PM | Reply

I could compare you to a summerâs day,
But see, you are far hotter and too sweet,
And summer is quite transient; will not stay
And after parting, leaves no one in heat.
Sometimes the pleasures in a summerâs glow
Leave one too lonely in their warmth too numb,
Without another heart that one can know
And in the night it fades to gloom and glum.

But see, your warmth and beauty shine a ray
That but grows sweeter in the thrill of night,
And leaves one yet in heat when youâre away,
And ever so your glory will bloom bright.
For you will shine, eternal as a star,
When these lines are forgotten as most are.