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Jesus, you I see (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

Jesus in my life I see Touching every part of me With His grace - abundantly Jesus, you I see. My life goes through With ups and downs Unfurling times of tears and laughs In all of this, there's not a doubt Jesus, you I see. With every step or act of mine There's someone else, someone divine Who guides me through to be my best Jesus you I see. Each time the sun shines brightly Or sets at dusk each day, Each time the sun goes twinkling by Or seems to rest up there, Each time the clouds grow bigger And then begin to rain; Astoundingly, its evident Jesus, you I see. In family, who love me, In friends who share my life, In nature all around me In land and sea and sky, No matter where I seem to be At work or play or sleep You're always there my one true friend... You're Jesus! You I see!

ALChemy 7-Dec-05/5:19 PM
Don't get me wrong there's some good lyrics out there but the expectations of a lyric are set lower in many peoples minds.
If it sounds like a good song you'll tend to get a higher vote because people are used to lyrics not translating to print well.




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