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Jesus, you I see (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

Jesus in my life I see Touching every part of me With His grace - abundantly Jesus, you I see. My life goes through With ups and downs Unfurling times of tears and laughs In all of this, there's not a doubt Jesus, you I see. With every step or act of mine There's someone else, someone divine Who guides me through to be my best Jesus you I see. Each time the sun shines brightly Or sets at dusk each day, Each time the sun goes twinkling by Or seems to rest up there, Each time the clouds grow bigger And then begin to rain; Astoundingly, its evident Jesus, you I see. In family, who love me, In friends who share my life, In nature all around me In land and sea and sky, No matter where I seem to be At work or play or sleep You're always there my one true friend... You're Jesus! You I see!

ALChemy 6-Dec-05/12:11 PM
It's fairly true to the form of a hymn. By calling it a lyric or a ballad or anything that implies that it might be sung it will increase your chances of getting a good vote for a mediocre poem.
http://poetry.allinfo-about.com/
http://www.poetrypower.com/poetry.htm
Best links I could find so far. Knowing what is what can only make your poetry better which is pretty good so far I might add.




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