poemranker ::Where I'm From by lil_evil_boi

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Where I'm From

Member since 2005 · Posted 1 Jun 2005 · 4 comments

I often ask where I’m from? Where am I really from? Am I from the fresh morning breeze of October, as the blank blue sky turn into haze. Am I from the busy streets of skyscrapers, wishing their shadows would conceal me from the ponderous blaze. Am I from “Go do you homework!” and “Get off the computer Am I from the tears of my relatives, as the distance between us become farther. Am I from Canadian immigrants, from 2000 and Taipei, Taiwan Am I from Japan, America, and China, as I travel to countries one after one. Am I from Snoopy the hamster, whose death still touches my heart. Am I from the Simpsons, listening to the evil cackles of Bart. Am I from believing Jesus, the triumph of doxologies, and the people saying “Amen”. Am I from watching starvation, as the African refugees torture by famine. But one thing I am definitely sure. I am from my hard work,from the present as I continue on my life journey.

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4 comments

[7] shrutikay 2-Jun-05/12:10 PM Reply
well ritten...
[n/a] lil_evil_boi › shrutikay 4-Jun-05/5:36 PM Reply
Thankz~
[5] Dovina 2-Jun-05/12:20 PM Reply
If you'd just made a list, it would say as much, and as little.
[9] sacred_poet_me 6-Jun-05/4:57 PM Reply
Love it!