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Where I'm From (Free verse) by lil_evil_boi
I often ask where I’m from? Where am I really from? Am I from the fresh morning breeze of October, as the blank blue sky turn into haze. Am I from the busy streets of skyscrapers, wishing their shadows would conceal me from the ponderous blaze. Am I from “Go do you homework!” and “Get off the computer Am I from the tears of my relatives, as the distance between us become farther. Am I from Canadian immigrants, from 2000 and Taipei, Taiwan Am I from Japan, America, and China, as I travel to countries one after one. Am I from Snoopy the hamster, whose death still touches my heart. Am I from the Simpsons, listening to the evil cackles of Bart. Am I from believing Jesus, the triumph of doxologies, and the people saying “Amen”. Am I from watching starvation, as the African refugees torture by famine. But one thing I am definitely sure. I am from my hard work,from the present as I continue on my life journey.

Up the ladder: A History of Truth
Down the ladder: Jesus, you I see

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.625
Weighted score: 4.899147
Overall Rank: 9888
Posted: June 1, 2005 5:45 PM PDT; Last modified: June 1, 2005 5:45 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] shrutikay @ 219.65.91.171 | 2-Jun-05/12:10 PM | Reply
well ritten...
[n/a] lil_evil_boi @ 70.68.76.244 > shrutikay | 4-Jun-05/5:36 PM | Reply
Thankz~
[5] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 2-Jun-05/12:20 PM | Reply
If you'd just made a list, it would say as much, and as little.
[9] sacred_poet_me @ 70.68.76.244 | 6-Jun-05/4:57 PM | Reply
Love it!
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