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Wash (Free verse) by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
Clothes arranged in heaps
Socks leap unseen into dark
corners of the room
Trudging through lint fluff
Soap powder clings to bare foot
Primates laugh at me
Wondering loudly
Why I make such a shrill fuss
Over woven plants
Hung on my body
To cover the base creature
I claim not to be
Jungle animals
Do not wash their stringy hair
in smelly white rooms
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.625
Weighted score: 4.899147
Overall Rank: 9895
Posted: June 20, 2005 7:15 PM PDT; Last modified: June 20, 2005 7:15 PM PDT
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There was only one bare foot?
Some punctuation would improve it, but it was a laugh.
glad you laughed.