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Words that the Earth has to say⦠(Free verse) by nothingtoanyone I live on and on imprinted into the surroundings.
My mark will go unseen and unnoticed by all.
They use me and abuse me.
Trash and thrash me day after day.
I wait for the day that they will see with open eyes.
Eyes that will see its to late, to late to save whatâs left of the
world.
Eyes that will cry tears, tears that fall do to plain and simple
stupidity.
Up the ladder:
Jesus, you I see
Down the ladder:
Wash
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Posted: April 23, 2004 11:34 PM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2004 11:34 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.899147 Overall Rank: 9890 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
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24-Apr-04/5:06 AM
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I bet you wish you were an elf. Yeah, that would be so cool, wouldn't it, to be an elf? But what if everyone else was an elf too? No, that wouldn't be as good. God, you're pathetic.
"too late, too late"....
last line is perfect...do to plain and simple stupidity....Genius! Unfortunately, the rest of it is endlessly unbearable drivel, and it is only 9 lines long. Well...Here goes the spin...5
"to[o] late"
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