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Words that the Earth has to say… (Free verse) by nothingtoanyone

I live on and on imprinted into the surroundings. My mark will go unseen and unnoticed by all. They use me and abuse me. Trash and thrash me day after day. I wait for the day that they will see with open eyes. Eyes that will see its to late, to late to save what’s left of the world. Eyes that will cry tears, tears that fall do to plain and simple stupidity.

edpeterson 24-Apr-04/6:14 AM
last line is perfect...do to plain and simple stupidity....Genius! Unfortunately, the rest of it is endlessly unbearable drivel, and it is only 9 lines long. Well...Here goes the spin...5




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