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Getting Burned (Lyric) by sliver What wonderful surprizes
This world has in store
For those with open eyes
Each day grants a little more
Let's pretend that life is a chamber
Holding not only water and blood
But a spirit designed to cure
This rapidly growing flood
Our lives should serve a purpose,
And it's not about ourselves.
selfishness and lack of trust
Will pave the road to hell.
I guarantee the more you give
The more you will get in return
The only way to truly live
Is not to worry about getting burned.
Up the ladder:
lost at sea
Down the ladder:
travel down, stop sign
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Posted: July 5, 2009 10:35 PM PDT; Last modified: July 5, 2009 10:35 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.094852 Overall Rank: 6161 Comments:
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madamefrufru @ 82.132.139.151
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15-Jul-09/3:30 PM
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I like the idea. No expert here but with some tweaking it could flow better
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sliver @ 209.248.123.49
> madamefrufru
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15-Jul-09/8:35 PM
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I totally agree, it's rough. I probably wrote it at 2 AM and never cleaned it up, it's funny, I was thinking similar thoughts the other day, maybe I should write a new one and delete this one... or something...
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