Re: Lost Identity by TLRufener	19-Dec-05/12:14 AM
Wow!! Well done.
Re: I love to see the sunrise by amanda_dcosta	19-Dec-05/12:17 AM
How do you have time to see the sunrise between waking your children? I see that you draw inspiration from your life, I'm glad to see that your life is inspirational.
Re: Privacy by Dovina	19-Dec-05/12:20 AM
In the beginning it somehow reminded me of Alice's Restaurant.
Re: Blah Blah by Blindpoetry	19-Dec-05/12:22 AM
Your originality is refreshing in this world of mediocrity.
Re: The Cowardice of Francis Evans by Caducus	19-Dec-05/12:28 AM
I liked the imagery, And I actually pictured hoarfrost in the first stanza.
Re: After the Storm by somemorepoetry	19-Dec-05/12:31 AM
Why the morbidity? It was going so well.
Re: Static by wilco	19-Dec-05/12:33 AM
I seem to enjoy everything you write. Another10.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Dec-05/12:37 AM
perhaps a skin graft would help?
Re: Tulips and Roses by Mona Lisa	23-Dec-05/1:03 AM
What does a gown of lashes have to do with Venus orbiting the Earth, Plus the other unity issues previously mentioned. Don't give up on it, just consider new alternatives.I didn't like hearing cotton twice, consider woolen womb maybe?
Re: Never Let Go Again by TLRufener	23-Dec-05/1:06 AM
Obviously a whoopsy-Daisy of a day, Keep it on the bright side.
Re: Temptation by PoeticXTC	23-Dec-05/1:12 AM
A worthy temptation for such a fall I imagine.
Re: Some poems by INTRANSIT	12-Nov-07/6:00 PM
Well done INTRANSIT, Well done. I can certainly relate to the I.C.U. part. Another well deserved ten for you. I haven't been around for a while but if time permits I'll read a few more of yours.
Re: INTELLIGENCIA by INTRANSIT	12-Nov-07/6:09 PM
As we think ourselves into a mellenial grave eh?
Re: Turning British by INTRANSIT	12-Nov-07/6:13 PM
What's next? Irish pub slush?
Re: Who's on First? by Melanie Jade	12-Nov-07/6:23 PM
Sound like you got a good batch of l.s.d.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Nov-07/8:17 PM
Again,I must say. Well done! This should be in the top ten
Re: Engine Braking by INTRANSIT	14-Dec-07/10:16 PM
Then the air brakes Staining to hold the load As the curve looms Incidius asphalt Dying to kill Hot brakes Nothing but a jake Standing between me and death Untill salvation arises A sign Runaway ramp ahead Fuck it The altenative is death
Re: Gladly For Love by sliver	4-Feb-09/10:50 PM
I know it's cheesy, but what's so wrong with that verse in particular?
Re: To Michelle by ALChemy	4-Feb-09/11:11 PM
I am baffled yet again, that's why I saved this to my fav's. Stupendous, genious, a piece of art.
Re: PHOTO by madamefrufru	16-Jul-09/1:28 PM
I can picture her there, in the casket, How sad that you only retained a sliver.