Re: After A Love is Lost by pinay_miss_azn	30-Jun-05/10:34 PM
When I first started reading this I wanted to tell you that the pain will subside... Scars are just something to brag about in a way.
Re: You and I by pinay_miss_azn	30-Jun-05/10:38 PM
So few really look in the eyes, it's always something else.Yet blue eyes can be a harbour for a lost soul.
Re: All Alone by pinay_miss_azn	30-Jun-05/10:40 PM
This one doesn't seem to hold your essence like the last two of yours I've read, something's missing.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Jun-05/11:06 PM
Oh, my, but haven't we been a busy boy with our new rating system. 0's all around. Yes chuck, I'd like to buy a ZERO. Do you suppose that's a bit harsh? really when you consider it, hell man, who are you to crush these smouldering dreams into ash, at least let them snuff themselves out with a woebegotten two. eh?I kept paging back on your voting history... Damn, man, you've crushed alot of spirit.
Re: No More Autumn Poems (Edit) by Sasha	21-Aug-05/11:54 PM
A vivid picture, I felt it all the way through.I've tried three times tonight, just can't write. Sooo, this is what I would do with this. If you like all or any, welcome. What voice could sing in joy of death Each leaf as it withers and dies fluttering down to mingle with the soil keeping it's host alive. this fitting requiem
Re: Tonight’s Halloween by TLRufener	12-Oct-05/12:04 AM
Hello friend, still at it I see. Doing well.
Re: Hell is spring by INTRANSIT	12-Oct-05/12:07 AM
I don't know about you, but I spent all day shoveling 6' snow drifts. SPRING? Not in Peyton Colorado,
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Oct-05/12:14 AM
I would also like to get in my *10*cents
Re: Better Off Dead by wilco	7-Dec-05/7:06 PM
But why pick that particular ending? Especially touching for me because it reaches into some not so distant memories of mine and wrings them out a bit. I likey.
Re: Jesus, you I see by amanda_dcosta	7-Dec-05/7:20 PM
A good way to live life.Knowing God is watching has a tendency to keep you honest.
Re: i dream in nine minute increments by ay deee	7-Dec-05/7:56 PM
It's funny, lately my dreams have been lasting a lifetime. Long story. Now is not the time. I especially liked the first stanza.
Re: Bri's Room (not done) by Sunshine Conkey	11-Dec-05/9:37 PM
Had an awful lot of stuff.
Re: You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet	16-Dec-05/9:28 AM
I guess you can call essays poetry now huh? I don't know, you see, I'm porr also.
Re: Bri's Room (not done) by Sunshine Conkey	18-Dec-05/11:48 PM
There is still room for improvement, as with everything.
Re: Mixed Quartet by Dovina	19-Dec-05/12:01 AM
A carol for the masses eh?
Re: To Michelle by ALChemy	19-Dec-05/12:04 AM
This smacks of Poe, beautifully done, time well spent. May she rest in peace.
Re: My kids by amanda_dcosta	19-Dec-05/12:08 AM
It didn't seem to smooth out until about a third of the way through, maybe it's just me.
Re: Do Something by Miggy	19-Dec-05/12:10 AM
A fine dream, but not within our nature I fear.
Re: to move foward by ay deee	19-Dec-05/12:12 AM
At least there's that.
Re: Returning Home by Niphredil	19-Dec-05/12:13 AM
I often feel the same way, but not so eloquently.