poemranker ::All Alone by pinay_miss_azn

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Free verse № 108227

All Alone

Member since 2004 · Posted 12 Jul 2004 · 2 comments

Here I am in my bed dreamin bout you and me together again... Sittin here all alone Missin you Wantin you When you left with no goodbye I felt my heart break in two cuz without you there'd be no me. Tears fall down, down my face but you're not there to make them stop. Without you tears would fall endlessly, tears of longing, tears of sadness. Please come back to me.. In my arms, you will rest. With my kisses you will be. Time would pass but here I am still alone, breaking down. But you're not there to stop the time and save me from my pain. So I guess, I'll just sit here, all alone.. waiting for you..to return... sometime..perchance....someday...

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[10] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 12-Jul-04/4:00 PM Reply
Hey, this is really great!!1 It reminds me of my new poem. Can I make a suggestion? I reckon "perchance" would be better as "peradventure."
[5] sliver 30-Jun-05/10:40 PM Reply
This one doesn't seem to hold your essence like the last two of yours I've read, something's missing.