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Losing To Anatomy (Free verse) by Blindpoetry
I saw your face
It was bleeding
Your tears are your disgrace
I'm not leaving
You can touch my life
And heal me
Bandages, Bandages
From you; They love me
I recieve life
And partake in history
Watch my heart beat
Beat you to the ground
Watch yourself lose
Lose to the anatomy
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Posted: August 21, 2004 10:38 AM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2004 10:38 AM PDT
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Make sense? ;) But I wrote this poem with something else in mind that even i couldn't really put in words, sort[of].
-lia